Wow

wOAH. I wasn't expecting this. Awesome story!

Wow, emotional stuff...

This short fanfic has so much emotion and power to it! The fact that Simon went through all that trouble to just destroy when its not the same, left a serious impact. Especially the end with, "So she looks at him contempt." My heart shuddered and became sad. You built up the story so well, its great. There are few punctuation mistakes but that doesn't detract from the fanfic!

I-I just...I am crying. This is so beautifully written. Poor Simon wants his princess back...
"So she looks at him with contempt." Nice callback to Holly Jolly Secrets!(but the episode made me cry, how was it jolly?haha...) I have no idea what to say other than that THIS piece of work is ah-ma-zing! :)