omg this is beautiful :)

ouch

This is such a good fanfiction! I love how you portray Leo and Reyna so perfectly! You are a really talented writer! :)

This was beautifully written-I think you captured Reyna and Leo perfectly. These two are like my fav characters(besides percabeth),and it's really hard to find authors who do them justice. But you did.
I loved it.

Oh my gods, this is amazing! you are an amazing writer and the style is magnificent! Wonderful! Simply wonderful!

This is beautiful and sweet and just PERFECT and I love everything about it. I especially love the little spanish words, especially when he calls her queen like that is PERFECT

Awwwww so sad.

oh wow. that was really beautiful, and amazingly written. i loved the last line especially, and wow you definitely deserve more than a single review. terrific. :D

I'm in love with this. I've been meaning to write an angsty version of these two and there are so many inspiring lines in this. Absolute new favorite. :)