hiiiiiiiii its me again so! seeing naruto sleeping around was a bit of a shock at first and i wasnt sure if i liked it bc it seemed so contradictory to his personality but! uve managed to sway me to the idea especially since uve revealed that its his way of coping with whatever happened to him in the past. Sasuke being an absolute prude is hillarious and i love it, ur characterization of sakura is beautiful and on point and missing all the shit stuff that kishimoto made her which is a definite improvement and yeah this is a very good story once again!

More?

more plz

Noooooo there are no more chapters yet. I'll wait!

NO! Keep on writing!

Please please please update this story! It's really good, and you would not dare leave the story at a cliffhanger like that! So please update soon!

Why are all your stories unfinished? They are of such good quality too it's a shame really you really should update them I suggest the Sasunaru ones first!

MORE PLEASE! WHY ARE ALL OF YOUR STORIES SO YET AND YET DONT CONTINUEEEEE!

Thank you for the fic! IT'S SO INTERESTING!

I hope to see more of it someday! (if not, well, it was awesome while it lasted! And good luck with life!)

Was going through my old fanfic favorites...SO GLAD to see you have updated! I really love this story! Please continue!

I'm typing a response for chapter 7 since I already did a review for it.

Well, I hope Naruto won't betray Kakashi, and the others. Naruto is pretty in character for his situation, and that includes not breaking his promises (Iruka). Did he promise to Iruka by the way? Hm. I'll check later.

I'm really interested in why Naruto was waiting for that scream. I have the faintest of idea, but I will not be satisfied until I know what you have intended.

Thank you for writing.

This would really be great as a anime series, or some sort of long movie

WHY! why did you end like this, this is terrible. One more chapter, that's all I'm begging you. Come on, get on and update, just one more! But this is really good, great job! :)

I so love and hate cliff hangers! Anyway, you've got me so hooked onto this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Nice cliffhanger. ;)

I liked that Kakashi backed up Sasuke's threat. Just because this is fanfiction and we all know Naruto is a good person because of canon, it doesn't mean that these characters should automatically trust him. Technically, they've only recently met him and have no way of knowing his true character. I think Naruto needs to truly prove himself, which he hasn't had opportunity to do yet, before they can all relax around him. Sasuke shows his mistrust in obvious ways, but to me, it wouldn't have made sense if Kakashi were on Naruto's side right now either. I think Kakashi is smart enough to avoid conflicts, but out of all of them, he should be the most weary, if nothing else than because he's the leader and has to be. Sakura's life is on the line if he becomes too complacent, so he needs to take all possibilities into account at all times.

Actually, I think it would be interesting if something happens where Naruto legitimately has to consider abandoning or betraying them. Just like Sakura & co. have only recently met him, he has only recently met them and their problems are not his problems. He took the job as a favor for Iruka, but if it's a choice between his own life and failing in his favor to Iruka, even Naruto wouldn't be so stupid as to die for something like that.

Enjoying the plot so far. :) Hope you update again soon!