| Reviews for The Pool Incident |
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   amyponderland chapter 1 . 5/24/2017 Short and sweet, love the pool setting~ |
| Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 11/27/2015 Really good |
| deeeelllleeeetteeeedddd chapter 1 . 11/7/2015 The story is interesting, and piques my interest very much as I am a huge fan of Psycho Pass. But, I feel you could've been more descriptive with the setting, and detail. I also would be interested in knowing what everyone was doing before the scene. This story is great, besides that, I think you should continue. |
| crlk chapter 2 . 8/28/2015 I know it's hard to update and stuff and I don't mean to be one of THOSE people bbbuuuttt when is the next chapter I really like it so far it's kind of funny. So please update soon really looking forward to it. |
| Turtlerma chapter 2 . 4/16/2015 It wasn't too sexual, don't worry. Though, what was with those marks on her body? |
| crazzyredhead chapter 2 . 11/25/2014 I wish you would have it wonder into the adult world.. Good story enjoyed it. |
| kittykatxox chapter 2 . 10/14/2014 Haha I so enjoyed reading this and really hope you plan on updating! |
| TheEmoVanity chapter 2 . 7/25/2014 This story seems really cool. Update! I have to know what happens next. |
| CrystalVixen93 chapter 2 . 6/28/2014 Can't wait to see what happens next so I hope u update again soon plz. |
| Kary Bobbins chapter 2 . 5/22/2014 Lol poor Akane, she just wanted to swim XD Nah the first part sounds fine to me, it could sound kinda sexual XD but I knew it was all a misunderstanding, that was the point. So all good to me ;) Glad to read your PP fics again :D |
| Erzatscarlett chapter 2 . 5/19/2014 This story is rated M for a reason - you could make it with more adult themes, it's ok. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2014 i know about Todd Allison and the Petunia Violet it's my favorite manga XD it's soooooo funny |
| Psychosomatic Delusion chapter 1 . 7/26/2013 sfkdnfjkhddvdfdbgdfh! MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE! MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE! MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE! MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE! MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE! MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE! MORE! |
| VampireAreej chapter 1 . 7/22/2013 i wonder what they were doing... i have no clue.. :/ |
| swanfrost chapter 1 . 1/27/2013 So...um...he was trying to teach her how to swim...? |
