Can you please continue working on this it's well written

Damn. I hope you come back one day.

best one

Yooooo. This is one of the best fanfics I have read. Will there be anymore chapters? Pls add moreeeeee !

Fantastic story. If your gonna continue it then go for it but if your gonna end it just please make it have one. Closure for the readers

Interesting story looking forward to your next chapter

Fantastic story. If your gonna continue it then go for it but if your gonna end it just please make it have one. Closure for the readers

Hello, I enjoyed your story very much.

I liked how Ben was so worried that he had done something wrong by Gwen, but he bravely went anyway, only to find out all she wanted was some snuggle time. Obviously much more pleasant than what he was expecting. Great chapter.

I found your disclaimer very funny and I am sure my good friend would agree with you about the animators of Omniverse.

add more please

I wish they had answered Grandpa Max's call. I really believe he'd support their relationship, even if it means running away.

Loving the book, dialogue is strong too you gotta be proud. Even if you don't plan to make more just make sure you finish the book. Amazing work overall though

I love you, this is hands down THE BEST fanfiction I've ever seen. The tension, the real emotions, it's indescribable...it's simply...perfect. I CANNOT wait for the next Chapter, but I sure as hell know this, it WILL be worth the wait ;)

Great character development. Can’t wait for more

Uh..when is this getting updated? Can you give a date or soemthing?

Incredible work. Detail on character feelings are perfect. Keep going though still amazing