Reviews for Fear In The Darkness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was cool! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice...cool to have Kíli as the hero for once, rather than Fíli. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the interaction and humor between fili and kili and thorin; great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like these kind of stories, and this was really good! Thank you for it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really great fic! |
![]() ![]() adorable :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for this nice oneshot :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore these little family fics! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good thing you added that note, otherwise I would have been all "ungoliant is a spider." I think you probably would have been safe with calling it a Kraken though...anyway, this was pretty sweet. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! Only thing is, Ungoliant is a legendary spider from Tolkien's 'Silmarillion', so I think the name is a bit too well known - when Thorin yelled the name, I thought he was using it as a curse or exclamation of shock/fear... Maybe you could name it after some other monster - also, Ungoliant is elven for 'ancient spider', and I don't think Thorin would use Elven. The Dwarves always seem to have their own names for things, anyhow. But using Ungoliant is still better than making up an un-Tolkienish name! :) RandomCelt |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooo I just loved it! And don't you dare keep away from writing for hobbit FF ! It's WONDERFUL! |