Reviews for Fear In The Darkness |
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OrangeSunset1701 chapter 1 . 11/9/2014 That was cool! Great job! |
1monster2 chapter 1 . 1/11/2013 I love this! |
Ginger chapter 1 . 12/29/2012 Great story! |
Purestrongpoem chapter 1 . 12/28/2012 Great story. |
People Person I'm Not chapter 1 . 12/26/2012 Very nice...cool to have Kíli as the hero for once, rather than Fíli. |
ginger-05 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012 i love the interaction and humor between fili and kili and thorin; great story! |
iadek4897 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012 I like these kind of stories, and this was really good! Thank you for it! :) |
vampyfreak chapter 1 . 12/22/2012 A really great fic! |
just a girl chapter 1 . 12/21/2012 adorable :) |
Lagerfeuer chapter 1 . 12/21/2012 Thanks for this nice oneshot :) |
astudyinscarl3t chapter 1 . 12/20/2012 I adore these little family fics! 3 |
Leahelisabeth chapter 1 . 12/20/2012 Good thing you added that note, otherwise I would have been all "ungoliant is a spider." I think you probably would have been safe with calling it a Kraken though...anyway, this was pretty sweet. :) |
The Wayfaring Strangers chapter 1 . 12/20/2012 I like it! Only thing is, Ungoliant is a legendary spider from Tolkien's 'Silmarillion', so I think the name is a bit too well known - when Thorin yelled the name, I thought he was using it as a curse or exclamation of shock/fear... Maybe you could name it after some other monster - also, Ungoliant is elven for 'ancient spider', and I don't think Thorin would use Elven. The Dwarves always seem to have their own names for things, anyhow. But using Ungoliant is still better than making up an un-Tolkienish name! :) RandomCelt |
Mzzmarie chapter 1 . 12/20/2012 Oooo I just loved it! And don't you dare keep away from writing for hobbit FF ! It's WONDERFUL! |