Good to see you are back. looking forward to the next chapter.

It is excellent chapter. I look forward to future updates.

great ch and hope for more updates

Great chapter again and I'm sorry about your friend don't worry about updating i've seen stories that have taken way longer to update than this you're pretty fast by my I just say Cecilia is the most awesome and kick-arse protaginist out there seriously she's better than Uma Thurman in Kill Bill.
I don't really like Decimus he grinds me the wrong way, Charles on the otherhand is as cool as ever.I hope Cecilia doesn't start flirting with Decimus or cheat on Charles in any way.
Can't wait for more!

great ch

I am very sorry to hear that. I hope that you and your other squadmates stay safe.
Excellent chapter, by the way. I look forward to the day when that c*** Sebastian gets his head removed; words cannot express my disgust for that character.

You have my condolences for the soldier. And i liked this chapter, hope you update soon.

It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.

I'm sorry losing a friend is never easy. You're also releasing chapters far more often than some other stories so you don't really have to be sorry.

I'm rather interested in how Cecilia will interact with the Templars and the grey wardens under her command both groups have reason to hate her if they discovered her true identity. It's also great to see she's getting support from tevinter already which she probably wasn't expecting so early.

I'm not actually sure but is the arishok in this story the sten from origins? I thought I read that in one of the earlier chapters but I'm not sure. If so then seeing her go against one of her mothers companions is going to be great

It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.

Good update

A simply wow! So realistic so interesting! The return of the Old God, terrible vengeance upon the Maker, Lord of War has come. Cecilia Therin, the Dragon Queen and Champion of the Old will see to the death of the Qun.

i just checked my review and it seems some of the questions didn't come out. The first words for question one were How Much and for question two werer How Old.

another great chapter! I have some questions.
much time has passed since the first story?
old is Cecilia's and Charles's son?
Can't wait for more and good luck in Afghanistan.

Good sequel, love it.