cute

Love love love the story. Great job

ARE YOU STILL ALIVE OUT THERE?!
COME BACK! PLEASE!

OH WOW OH WOW OH WOW THAT WAS INCREDIBLE-
Ahem, excuse me, I'm just a bit overwhelmed. This really has been incredible. I love this story, and I'm so sad not to see an ending. But, as impromptu endings go, this was pretty good.
Thank you very, very much for sharing this-I've really, really enjoyed reading, and I will definitely be back for re-reading. Awesome work. :]

" The hood is a little larger, for your sulky days-"

"I do /not/ sulk."

What event in America are you referencing?

You can also name her Mary. William Joyce's kids are named Jackson and Mary.

um you meant the blizzard of '68'

This story is incredible! I hope that you continue it soon :) Thanks so much!

Wha? But you didn't finish! And such an awesome story too.

I really, really hope you finish this, and soon.

Wow! My alerts have been screwy for a while now, so I stopped getting updates fro this at around chapter 8. I can't believe I missed so much! This has been absolutely outstanding to read. The ending to this chapter was beautiful, and I'm looking forward to the aftermath of it. It's looking like the wind down is all that's left.
I swear, catching up on this absolutely took my breath away. It's been wonderful.

Jamie was adorable by the way. As was the way that Jack shanghaied North into letting him go help.
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I'm sure that I've mentioned this bit before, but it seems to me that the entire point of this story is that Baby Tooth is made of awesome. The only reason Pitch's plan failed here was because that Baby was just as stubborn as Jack, and gave him reason to get back up again via teeth memories.

Ok, please update this. Its incredible and I'm really doubting that you are actually going it update, since you haven't since 2013. This may be my favorite RotG fanfic out there and thats sayin' something, since I've read more fanfic then any person should. You make the characters so multifaceted with a depth that makes them seem to come alive. Please continue writing this. Its always sad to see any abandoned fanfic.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I AM DYING HERE! I am also a writer, and this book has been a wonderful inspiration to my creativity! Thanks, and keep up the good work!

I read the last bit and went to click for the next chapter. It wasn't there, yet... I swear people on the other side of the world could hear my "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" of disappointment. This is so good! Keep up the awesome work, please!