Reviews for The Beast Within |
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ThatOneBrokenDeskYouHadToSitOn chapter 6 . 9/21 I like how Percy wasn't going to just accept the pack. Uncle Rick's version of Percy would have outweighed so to speak all sensibility. I didn't really enjoy how Will, Silena, and the others thought Percy would just accept them. That's bullshit. I loved this chapter so much. Keep up the good work! |
Yellowmiki98 chapter 1 . 4/14/2018 I loved the last line it was funny. I really need to stop reading right now it's already 1:00 what does Nico say? I would copy and paste it into google translate but I can't right now sadly enough and I'm too lazy to attempt to type it into the box. |
Guest chapter 8 . 9/14/2017 Aww Nicos's so sweet! Ich liebe dich mein gefährte, jetzt und for all ewigkeit |
HeartThrobbingFanticyLover chapter 7 . 5/17/2016 I forgot to ask what the hell does Nico day |
HeartThrobbingFanticyLover chapter 8 . 5/17/2016 Ok this was good not one of my favorites it seemed like it was off and stuff from there others I read and like but its still good though I thought Nico and Percy should have been different a bit and the way you have Nico Percy Leo Hazel and Frank together doesn't seem to fit as perfect as I thought and hoped not that it isn't a good story |
frozenheartofdarkness chapter 8 . 9/13/2015 This was totally adorable! And smutty at the same time...but really adorable too. And it had a nice supernatural turn from the usual Percy Jackson stories. A great story! ;D |
Cheshieru chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Am I the only one kinda unsatisfied with this? Cuz it's just like, Percy turns into a wolf and Nico tells him that he was supposed to be a hunter... And then they have sex. The smut was awesome, as always, but it's just like "Oh I was supposed to be an important hunter like my father? Okay let's have plotless smut." :I just saying |
Miss Emotion chapter 8 . 12/27/2014 OMG *blush* There were some really cool moments in this like when Percy was angry saying "ruined my life" Also hahahaha they fucked happily ever after XD Hahahaha Hazel |
Miss Emotion chapter 1 . 12/27/2014 Ouuu |
Shadow of the Angel chapter 8 . 12/13/2014 Damn. More sexy time. And Eight pups total. EIGHT AND MORE TO GO! |
Shadow of the Angel chapter 6 . 12/13/2014 A lot of 'sexy time' in this chapter. A LOT. |
Shadow of the Angel chapter 1 . 12/13/2014 Gosh. There are so many stories to read! But I love finding a story written by you that I haven't read before (even if it was written a few years ago). Keep up the work. I love your stories! |
3646 chapter 3 . 11/23/2014 u r AWESOMSAUCE LUV ur FANFIC |
Dream Bound Nightmare chapter 8 . 10/23/2014 ... my mind is completely blank. You know there is SO MUCH you could have done with this, it's a shame really but otherwise okay |
Wolf154657 chapter 8 . 9/12/2014 XD cute |