Aw this is adorable. Happy zutara week!

Wow that was awesome! I like the four lightning bolts. ;)

Also I have no idea if you receive notifications for these age-old fics. I’m reading them because my husband is having me watch the last Airbender (which I totally missed out on) and when I saw the author of my favorite fic (wcpahwcbat) also wrote Zutara fics, I had to read them all!

I love awkward zuko

I'm going to say right now: A characterization. I 100% believed it, and also I generally appreciate innocent-ish but eager Zuko, experienced but not bragging Katara, and their general dynamic as they figure out the whole sex thing. Well done indeed.

Steamy ;) I think a little more build-up and anticipation would improve this, but it's already quite sexy

Ah. Teenage awkwardness bundled in with the practicality of sex and all the messiness involved. I like that you don't shy away from the details, that they work their way up to 'it' and are brutally honest with each other about their history and what they want to do each step of the way. I also like your descriptions of their positioning and how active Katara is, how she initialises the final act and the rather blunt way she states/blames 'gravity' for the mess afterwards. It makes these characters feel more like people than puppets.

omg finally! no one ever writes about zuko's inexperience! thank you!

"Yeah, well. Gravity."

I love your ability to make the characters so down to earth - like an honest, but grittier version of their canon counterparts. Nice (and seriously hot) snippet!

Awww sweet lemonade

This was great! I love stories where Katara knows exactly what she wants. Zuko was super adorkable :) Very realistic sex scene.

Enjoyed

"I want your first time to be with someone who loves you." Was this channeling "Perks of Being a Wallflower"? Or just accidental? Either way, I liked it. Zuko is super adorkable as such a newbie, and the smut was pretty steamy
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Actions do speak louder then words, but these words speak for hot action! Nicely done though I think the beginning could've been developed more. Where was the rest of the gAang at this time? Anfd maybe a better set up for Katara, I don't think she'd sound like that however Zuko was adorably great! Nice work all around though! Great smut!

That was great. I loved the confessions before this, andth " I'm not good with words." I laughed out loud a number of times. But I really want to see a sequel with Aangs and the rest of the gaang's reactions to the relationship. I always like seeing/reading that type of thing. Great work. Not just smut, funny, satisfying witty smut. (Also I can imagine them acting exactly like this especially zuko not being good with words!