me encantoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

I love it

The ending was definitely adorable, but I feel like I'm missing something. Whatever happened to Brian? Was he convicted for kidnapping and attempted murder? I don't remember reading it but it could just be that my memory is getting away from me. All in all though, wonderful story. Great job.

It was a nice story I love it

So sweet! Absolutely love it :)

Update as soon as you can I love this chapter it's so cute and sweet

I'm actually quite enjoying this story. You've come up with a very interesting plot line and I look forward to reading more.

J.L :)

I was right Brain kidnapped her and now she is hurt because she was trying to escape
Why can't boys try to understand girls better and realize when they are treating them the wrong way
Uodate when you can I really like this chapter

With the way this chapter is heading (Brian holding Yugi captive), it looks like the ending may be a little rushed? Or do you have plans for a sequel?
Unless this was all a plan to arrest Brian...? Anyway see you next chapter! :)

Isn't this the same as last chapter

It is the same as last chapter?!

I'm guessing Brian was trying to get into Yugi's room update when the next chapter is done

Update as soon as possible

So does this mean Brian like Yugi and he is jealous that Yami and Yugi kissed each other
Update when you have time

So I was right he does like Yugi I know u update not long ago it update when u have the time