Is there anyway you would do a mature version of this? Or have you done one and posted it somewhere else?

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I loved it amazing job

Kyaa I love the lovescene,and Sebastian!~ *blushes*

Yeah and one hell of alot of other things too.

That was a asome story I loved it hope you write more.

Loved it

My friend sent me this...I should be scared

I am fuckin 12 but still love this shit oml ty so much this is awesome

gorgeous

This was awesome XD I liked that u put yourself in!

Omg yesssssss

ps... JUST playing cards?! haha I like your trick there

um dunno wut exactly to say. normally, it takes half an hour for a person to get aroused. that must really hurt. so much 4 lemons. i don't hate them. I've read from dnangel to shugo chara, inu x boku ss, fairy tail, one punch man, and this. can't say you're bad ;) its just so fast that it didn't get to hit me. so, I say I like it... ja-da!

Please do another chapter, I want to know what happens after this. Do does sebby ask you to be his girlfriend or introduce you to ciel and you fall in love ciel, I'm courious!