I loved this. I really did, actually. As much as I love Drastoria, I enjoyed this immensly :)

Your writing was lovely and you made me hate Daphne, but feel sorry for her at the same time.

Just one thing, Astoria is younger than Daphne :)

Excellent job. *Favourites*

I loved this! The ending was really good. I ship Draco/Astoria, but this is a great idea for some angst and drama!

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This is just lovely. The flow here is perfect, it's almost like a flowing river with no end. Every word was like poetry, really, or a song. I really liked how Daphne was unsure whether she truly loved Draco or not because Astoria was with him. I really love the title, spin those beautiful lies, the imagery coming from it is so vivid, I can see that princess in Rumplestiltzkin spinning straw into gold on a spinning wheel, and she's thinking lies, lies, lies. This was such a brilliant fic!

Oh this... so beautiful and wonderful.
"Spin those beautiful lies, dear Daphne. Spin those lies."- this line is a little awkward, I love the spin the beautiful lies part and the way you repeat it at the end, but dear Daphne doesn't fit quite as well. The patronizing tone is wonderful, but it just doesn't sound right, ya know?

Yo no pude respirar cuando leì esa cuenta, allí.

That was really well done. :) I love the idea of it all, and you wrote it really well.

[and it pleases you, that you have the ability to make Draco want you in a way that Astoria cannot.] That was one of my favorite lines. It really showed the base of their relationship, and the whole problem at hand. You wrote that so well, and it was just... asfslkf. Amazing job. :)