Reviews for The Surprise
Sparti28 chapter 1 . 6/27/2018
Aww another cute one shot that I hoped would become a full story! Thanks for sharing it was great!
A Musing Brunette chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
Ahhh that fluffiness caught me in a sentimental mood. Cute. Thanks for it.
kk chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
OMG that was so so freaking adorable!
mira-mirarose chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
So sweet! I love this! I am seriously gonna favourite this fic! So adorable
Scherherazade chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Nicely written piece. Everyone in character.
livelovepeacelaugh chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Oh my gosh so awesome ! I love when he opems the gift. I also loved (laughing my head off) when hunny tried offering him sweets and mori taking him to safety! Good job on capturing the characters so well :3
Tawny chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Pretty awesome prezzie :D
Destinies Entwined chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
absolutely charming! This type of situation is exactly the type of thing I would START a fic with. because we know that once Kyouya's interest in something is piqued (which is a rare occasion, it seems) he's fixated. _
XTemporaryInsanityX chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
you should write an epilogue about how that gift made them get married or something because i just want that :) plus you're an amazing writer, so i would love to read more! XD
SonLisa chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I let out a legit loud squeal at the very end making my parents come into my room to check on me making me squeal even more . (x That was adorbs ;3 Even though I had to squint to see to KyoHaru XD This really seems like something that'd actually be in the series QuQ
Kayla7621 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
this was pretty cool.
blushingfeather chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
I loved this! Your writing style is so... clear I guess? Maybe concise is the word. It was very good at doing it's job and I really liked it! Thanks for the story!
Spirit09 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Awww! Kyoya love, yay. It was very cute I think, and Kyoya being my fav character I normally critisise fics about him (but not in reviews cuz I think that's mean and I don't like mean things) but this one, I have nothing to critisise about. Cute and sweet. Well written as well. Ciao ;o)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
That was so cute!
mcangel1976 chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
This was a good story. :D
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