Reviews for Concurrency
Kelis Watson chapter 4 . 12/30/2017
Dear Elfpen,
I know its been two almost three years since you've updated this story, but i think its good and am wondering where you would go with this, it sounds interesting.
peace
-Kk the dalek hunter
DalekQueen7 chapter 4 . 7/19/2016
Many of your other stories are among my absolute favorites, so it's always a pleasure to discover something else that you've written. Don't know if you're still working on this story, but I absolutely love it so far! Merlin is such a sad old thing, but it's nice that he's moving forward with his memories - however slowly - and that he's opening up more to Will. I love your description of Merlin's eclectic mixture of belongings. It added so much to his character and made me laugh out loud several times. Your use of Welsh in the text also adds a bittersweet sort of nostalgia, since it's probably similar to the dialect that Merlin spoke when he was younger. This is a lovely, sweet story.
Laughy-Taffy the Grape chapter 4 . 6/25/2016
You know that moment when you find a really good story and you are super excited to read it and you reach a great part and think, "Wow! This is getting good!" and you go to click the next button and realize . . . there is no next button.

So! I've liked it so far! Will is funny, and an archaeologist. I love that stuff. I am surprised that Arthur hasn't occurred to him yet: i thought that the dragon was Arthur's recognized symbol. Good stuff though :)
TimeyWimeyBadWolf chapter 4 . 6/19/2016
The summary was a bit confusing/misleading, so this wasn't what I expected - it was better! This is super awesome. The raw emotion and intricate friendship building, along with neat little details and anecdotes, make this story very enjoyable to read. Well done, this is written well. Please continue!
Lucydolly22 chapter 4 . 6/13/2016
Why haven't you been finishing your stories? there are so many that have potential to be amazing but you just end them randomly. Do you need help editing? I would be a willing volunteer. I love Will's character, i really want more of this story and many others of your merlin fics. Please don't abandon them.
catchme21 chapter 4 . 5/25/2016
Poor Merlin. Will you clotpole wake up.

So as I read through your older stories I couldn't help but cackle at all of the "sorry this took forever"...I simply got to hit "next". Now I'm waiting.

Damnit.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/5/2016
This is absolutely fabulous! I'm really enjoying the premise of this story, you have linked the two fandoms together seamlessly! However, I'm not in pins and needles to see where this is heading, but you haven't written anything since last April, is there any chance that you are still working on this story?
Lamarquise chapter 4 . 12/27/2015
Going to finish this up? I'd love to read the rest.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/5/2015
Oh my gosh this is brilliant! I love it so much! Poor Will has no idea it's actually Camelot. Excellent story! One of the best I've ever read! I especially love the Harry Potter references, and just, EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS STORY! I love it so much, you don't even know. :D
Aithusa chapter 4 . 6/23/2015
Update please! This is so bloody good.
Aithusa Vase chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
I'm actually loving this story, even though it's so short! When's Arthur arriving? ;)
Kellsabelle chapter 4 . 6/1/2015
I love this! The plot and the characters seem to be developing so intricately and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Noip13 chapter 4 . 5/27/2015
YES! UPDATE!

Love how this is going. Really like the backstory you gave for why Merlin had to clear out all of the Camelot stuff, and why the castle looks so different. It's just a tiny detail, but it adds to the world building.

And I just really like how you characterize Merlin and Will. OCs bother me most of the time, but Will seems both believable and a very nice guy.
mizzymel chapter 4 . 5/28/2015
I love where this is going. Please update soon
Inkling Blotspot chapter 4 . 5/22/2015
This is wonderful... Please update.
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