YAYYAYAYA!

This is one of the best stories I have ever read! Seriously! The best grammar, plot, word choice, detail, SERIOUSLY! Update quicker!

Can you have Natan (Natalie and dan) as well as Amian(Amy and Ian)

UPDATE OR I WILL RIP MY HAIR OUT!

OOOOOOMMMMMMZZZZZZZ! Oh my Zeus!

ian was 16 in the last one... now he is 15! confusing

you are such a beautiful writer and I love you and your writing and please update fast I need more

Yesss!
You finally updated!
Awesome!
(Kill Ruby)
Update soon, I love this!

AWWWWWWWWWW! Finally! Is this the last chapter? I hope not!

Oh my word.

FLUFF! I lvoed this chapter. Okay Ruby-Belle is dumb, but Ian and AMy kissing! *squeals*
But now I so badly want to know what happens next.

Oh... my gosh...
Asdfghjkl; I don't know what to say aaaahhh
You know what an absolutely weird, NATURAL chapter this was?! Ian in that situation would naturally think like that. He's not OOC, he's being a BOY. He's so confused it's sad. At least he followed his instincts... to that...
THAT KISS OMG. SNDWISSKOWSLSKMSAJA,DM;/&-jksow IT WAS A KISS. AN AMIAN KISS.
:')
The Ruby-Belle kiss made me so mad. Especially the way Ian looked at it. "Who was this girl to kiss him so passionately in their second meeting?" THAT was my exact thought liek bouncing all over my mind :O
Also, his reasoning at the beginning... flawed, yes, because Amy can also be a normal girl and their relationship can be absolutely untainted by their Cahill-ness. :3
Woohoo is Amian together now :'DDD
Well there're still a lot of problems... But I'm a fickle reader, I WANT THE AMIAN. Lol
I LOVED the traffic-line/stop-sign metaphor. I laughed SO much at that lol xD
All in all, Doc, I don't see why you're worried about this. Sure, Ian acted maybe a little impulsively and it's not in his nature to do so, but you explained every move of his and it was quite natural, TBH. :D IT WAS FANTABULOUS, HA, I TOLD YOU SO. xDD
(Sorry this was a little confusing at the beginning, I was freaking out over the chapter. XDDD)

Sri x

Ian, you Idiot.

Update date where amy goes back to the zoo the next day and flirts with Jackson and they start going out but ian gets jealous and makes them break up so he can go out with amy or you could do something different update soon you blob

Aww! So close!

UPDATE! I COMMAND YOU!

Oliver Twist? GASP! Amy likes that book? IAN likes that book? How can anyone like that book? I tried to read it once, because I thought it was about a boy who is kidnapped by a bunch of thieves who teach him how to steal. But in reality, it's not. It's mostly boring. And my favorite character is brutally murdered. Which is sad.

Anyhow, regarding the story- I love it! I cannot wait to find out what happens next.