i have just read all of them in today and i never think of such a good ending between yancy and before. Especially after reading the pokemon special manga, this make me feel so happy. U are the best write

I've read this story like multiple times and despite the few grammatical errors this story never ceases to amaze me, I would dare say that this is a true love story I have played the Xtranceiver Yancy event from Pokemon Black 2 and I always wondered what it would be like if the player character and Yancy had a story together and I finally found the perfect one. Overall I love your written work probably the best I have seen so far when it comes to video game or anime fanfics, the characters have more well character compared to the game itself, I like the extra chapter it was entertaining, the grammar could use a little work but I feel like those were just typos, and thank you for creating this masterpiece.

Honestly, I enjoyed the whole story. It was so wonderful, I could feel the struggle of the feelings of Yancy and Nate. Especially the scenes at the hospital, including the first kiss (oh, sorry, Yancy. You said it doesn't count at all XD) and the fact, she is the only thing, that calms down Nate after he woke up - it was so heartwarming.
But I recognized, that I had some simular ideas you had, when I draw a Transceivershipping-Doujin on my own some years ago. Like Nate being a extremely strong trainer, Yancy's close friend is Candice, Rosa having a "secret" crush on Nate or at last they become parents as well, when they're grown-ups, with their daughter looking exactly like you described her in your story. Well, I never published mine, so it's just a great coincidence, but I guess, that's why I loved it so much.

OMG OMG OMG (!) THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC IVE READ I AM SCREAMING AAA
I LOVE HOW THINGS ARE GOING SO SMOOTHLY PLUS THE WAY U MADE NATE SO COOL
KEEP UP MAKING MORE LIKE THESE PLSSS 3333
ILY 3 FOR THIS GEM FANFIC AND I HOPE U KEEP IT UP AND NEVER STOP AT ALL XD
eh sorry for the capslock I am just fangirling

why did I not read this sooner I love the ending I saw the update but thought it was something else then my friend told me it was a chapter so I read it great job you are an amazing writer.

An amazing end, this was a great story. As for the twins, maybe the girl can be named Sasha and the boy can be named Keith. As for personalities, maybe Sasha can be like her father, likes to battle and upbeat, and Keita can be like his mother, shy and embarrassed easily, but still likes to battle. Anyways, like I said, this was a great story, well done

Finally after a long time, welcome back buddy. It's good to see that you're back, and you gave me a fantastic start for the new year, it's sad to hear that this Story is over. And pls make that mini series going, and i'll definitly read it (must). Keep up the good work and goodluck

Yes please.. Do an aftermath summary on what happened to Nate and Yancy..

This is a really great story, really hope that it'll update soon

U should write an aftermath plsss like having the news and a great ending

Continue this motherfucker.

Like it so much! Thanks for the kissing section, Shakeitup! Do more of this kind of transceviershipping and I'll be happy to read it... Same goes to the rest! Do more, bro... Gimme some interest on it..

Perfect beginning, perfect ending... What a whole romantic story you can write there... And I still don't believe that the climax and the POV's are somehow not suitable, yet understandable... Bro hope you can write more of this kind of story... It's quite good already..

it was good you should do more also i is a strange thing that in pokemon black 2 the male character is named nate ans that is my name

MAKE AN 8TH CHAPTER NOW!