usually i hate Dumbledore coz his greater good thing but the reason is ariana in here i understand him. i pity him. live this story!

That was so nice of Harry to be able to forgive Dumbledore at the end. I do wonder how this turn of events would shape the future now they know about Kingsley and Harry. Harry had enough of a smear campaign against him the first time around. I'm sure that the current administration would try to make things harder for him, especially Umbridge.

This is really good.

Haha love it! Awesome job!

That was a well written piece. Have you considered writing a second chapter where you cover the resulting fall-out of Royal and Hyphen's visit? I cannot see Fudge or Delores changing their minds regarding the experiment, but having the unspeakables and the professors become more proactive could be a good plot.

Original and well written!

Weee! Oh my Hogwarts! This is so good! I love it! Maybe a little continuation? Please?

I liked this a lot! I only feel a bit like you rushed the ending. I mean, I had expected more reactions to "Hyphen" being Harry, or some connections to his "I must not tell lies" scars. The rest is very good, though. Too bad it's a oneshot.

Dam it...don't leave it there, what happen's next ?

Grrrr...any way I give you: One Gold Star for your short story.

Hope to see more soon.

The Crimson Mage.

P.S: Hope you have a Happy New Year !

Is this a one-shot? Also damn, he didn't help his younger self out at all.