This story was excellent! Such a clever premise and what a wonderful way to show the development of their relationship. Loved the story and your writing skills are superb.

I just found this story and and it was one of the best story's I have ever the ending,it was perfect how it all added to that moment.

OMG! that was a looooonnnnnnnnggggggg story! took me 1 and a half hrs, well that may just be me...BUT it was worth it! Hope you keep writing stories like this

Interesting concept and really fun to read! It was interesting to see her journey flipped around like this.

I think not allowing us to "hear" Sesshomaru was really clever. The ending was a little abrupt, but I still enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing this story.

Eh.

too cute.

well the part about sesshoumaru transforming back in a heart beat didn't really startled me..infact i was expecting or simply i have a feeling that he's starting go see t right from the time when he started to have those strange mood swings from the sad howling..and i also had a nagging thought of him not wanting to transform back because he thouht that kagome will leave him after knowing he no longer need her aid..actually the words you used also gave you out..like the part when you elaborate him to be looking at naraku or pointedly looking at someone or something which means he isnt that much blind because when kagome first saw him at the first time at the clearing he can't look straight at her right?
well this is such a great story and i like it just the way it is also with your good writing skills..the words about sesshoumaru looking straight at naraku or someone isn't really bothersome..it's a good way to help solve the puzzle really...
sorry for the long comment but this is a good strory and you're an awesome writter..i can give you that much

Absolutely loved this change in events! Everything flowed perfectly and I loved how you kept him in his puppy dog form the entire way! Good job dear!

I love it sweet as run and you had jiniji I love it

Wow awesome story loved it

He kept his feeling very, very hidden, I couldn't tell when or if he started having feelings for her. I'm sure Kagome never expected his confession :D But I'm really glad he was brave enough to show her his feelings :)))

I loved reading your story. I was afraid you'll end this story with one of them dead or separated by the well, or something like that. So I was very happy with the ending :D Thank you!

I was going through my Favorite Authors List today and remembered how much I like your writing style. You never disappoint. :)

Love It! Absolutely Love It! Please write a sequel! I want to see what happens next! Please!

It was a really good story, great job.