Such a good story. I hope that she escapes soon! She deserves it as she had been through so much. Sora! Stop being lazy and get over there and save her! That or have Terra save her (that'd be FAR more fitting. What goes around comes around...)

I kinda feel like I'm Reading something that was made to tease something that I already read... but well, I can't say I didn't enjoy it.

It's a nice new take on the preexisting, changing it to fit your side of things a bit better, and I think that's exactly what you were going for, isn't that right?

Wow! It's like that scene in the game. You've written it nicely! :D