Love it

I hate what happened to Dr. M and Ella in the last two books. I feel really bad for Iggy and Max. Even the flock. I’m not saying what happened cuz I don’t how many people have read the last two books

I love Iggy. Especially in the last scene

I get why she ran. If she didn’t fang would’ve fallen in love with Maximum Martiaz. (Sry if I spelt that wrong) not Maximum ride. It would’ve made a heck of lot more problems. But so did running away... um well in both situations she was screwed. None of that was supposed to be mean in anyway. Sry if it sounded like it

Sooo im guessing Fang is her brother. Because I’m also guessing that you want to add some Eggy in the story and that wouldn’t work if they were siblings. I’m guessing iggy and Gazzy are brothers and angel is either ellas little sister or fangs. How much did I get right? Or did I totally get it wrong :p (I think I used the right emoji. Not to sure unless it :) or ): )

I know I'm late but it triggers me because their last names are Carroway and not Martinez

You write absolutely beautifully, this story is truly inspiring and it honestly changed my life and view on things, I hope that you continue writing because you are an inspiration to many people -including me- oherall I want to say thank you for chamging my view on multiple problems in this century, you might not read this but i just wanted to let it all out Thank You so very much

But… Portland isn't THAT crowded… I mean, we're not all that touristy.

You sead to review soooo, hi

I completely agree that anything past book 5 is completely shit. All the fan fiction authors and fans of maximum ride should form a secret group and kidnap JP and make him rewrite the ending of the series. I think Your writing is really good, and thankyou for the amazing story, you always have the best plots, and I like how the characters don't jump into relationships. You'll probably never see this, but if you do I also commented on one of your other stories, Thanks! - K

This story seemed kind of familiar, so I think I've read part of it before. The probable reason why I stopped last time is that this is entirely too fluffy for my tastes. Made it through this time though. The plot and writing quality were really good, and I can't blame you for my personal preferences.

Thanks for sharing.

Just finished this fic and i loved it! the plot and writing was great, easily one of my favs

FUCKING YAY M8

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prees F4 then 1 lol soz

I LOVE THIS LITTLE PART
I LOVE DR. MARTINEZ (Carroway)
I LOVE EVERYTHING