None of this is true because I have read the real books so you're lied

I like it, but the end is just sad and the VERY end is to predictable

Oh mah gurd sadnezz villez!...

I read this story on the warriors offical site. PLAGARISM!

Awesome!

This is one of the most well-written and in character post-The Last Hope fics I have read! Very well-written and realistic!

Let me just say this now: I hate Warriors fics. I hate all the OCs, I hate the weird new clans and I hate the lack of continuity.
But this fic is honestly the best one I've ever read. Thank you so much.

Wonderful simply wonderful. If Morningkit is a mixter of Cinderheart and Lionblaze then she must be put under constent supervision.

I understand 'tremble for yourself my man,' is a song lyric, but I don't think it really works as the title for anything Warriors related. "Man," is a shortened form of "human," and these books are about cats. They don't even know the word human, so they wouldn't know man. Also, Bramblestar isn't a man. He's a tomcat.

As for the one-shot, it's really good. You have great writing, keep it up :)

[The large tomcat flicks his ear, grasping the squirrel by it's tail and pulling it closer to him while he sits up in the newly refreshed nest (he can still smell Firestar's scent, no matter how long the moons have seemed).]
It's "its," not "it's."

[And it begins to dawn on him – she never made any indication of wanting to become deputy, certainly not just after her beloved fathers death.]
It's "father's."

["No, no, it's not you...I'm just...," he trails off, loosing what to say.]
It's "losing."

[He wasn't the cat who took his brothers life for his leaders; it was a selfless act that had earned ThunderClan's complete trust.]
It's "brother's."

[His neck fur is spiked up, expecting it to be an intruder (though it's a strange accusation; he's sure that the camps guards wouldn't just allow an enemy cat to just stroll into the camp, past Brightheart, Sandstorm, and Whitewing and walk right up to him).]
It's "camp's."

[The gray kitten, dips her head, and attempts to scuttle off, but only trips over her tail.]
You don't need the first comma in the sentence.

["I'm not mad at Dewkit; I look just like my father, and he wouldn't know any better but to assume so." He tells them, shoving that indignant response down to the back of his throat.]
I'm not sure if you meant to capitalize "He," but it would work better, I think, if the first period was a comma and "He" wasn't capitalized.

["I'm sorry for asking," He jolts out of his reverie when he hears Amberkit's mewl, "We'll go – but it was nice talking to you, Bramblestar." She meows, sounding even more embarrassed than she did when she bumped into his leg.]
It would be:
["I'm sorry for asking." He jolts out of his reverie when he hears Amberkit's mewl. "We'll go – but it was nice talking to you, Bramblestar," she meows, sounding even more embarrassed than she did when she bumped into his leg.]

[He doesn't know how do go on with his explaniation – it sounds better in his mind than it does aloud, he realizes.]
It's "explanation."

["I guess so. I mean, even if my dad was evil, I don't think I could really ever hate him." He tells the leader.]
Again, I'm not sure if you meant to capitalize "He," but I think it would work better like this:
["I guess so. I mean, even if my dad was evil, I don't think I could really ever hate him," he tells the leader.]

["Are you two bothering Bramblestar?" she asks, than looking up at Bramblestar.]
It's "then."

["You're dad should be proud of you, Bramblestar," she meows, giving him a wide smile.]
It's "Your."

[The day carries on quietly, and soon enough, it's sunhigh, and most cats are languidly laying around the camp. He sees Purdy laying near the elders den, with Lilykit and Seedkit sitting in front of him; he's probably sharing yet another one of his infamously long stories.]
I believe it's "lying." It's "elder's."

[You've been there for everything, and...thank you for it." He tells him, his usually snappy and irritated behavior dropping.]
*he

[Neither of them shrink away from him, like he'd expect them too, they stay, excepting the sign of affection, just like two sons would to their father.]
It's:
[Neither of them shrink away from him, like he'd expect them to, they stay, accepting the sign of affection, just like two sons would to their father.]

["Let all cat's old enough to catch a piece of prey – I mean, their own prey – gather beneath the Highledge for a Clan meeting!"]
It's "cats."

All right, I'm going to stop pointing out your mistakes. I finished reading everything, and there were more, but this review's long enough already. :P You can ask me to point them out later if you want to.

Wowwww. Good job! :O My favorite part was when they were caught nuzzling at the Gathering and Blackstar winks at Bramblestar. XD I was really sad when Squirrelflight's two first births didn't go well, but I'm happy that her third was successful!
This was written really well, and I enjoyed reading it. I liked how you put it in present tense; most people don't. I write in present tense for one of my stories, and sometimes it annoys the heck out of me. XD
For your first fic, I'm not surprised there weren't more mistakes, so good job! :)

-Ponyiowa
-Nightstar of WillowClan