Great story, very heartfelt, and while I don't know if Naoto would react like this or not, it still felt believable enough to make the story feel very genuine. Also, my condolences for your loss, your feelings are clearly represented in this fiction, and it makes it a very powerful story.

Beautiful Story and i lost my grandmother a year ago too, so I know what you mean.

beautifull, brilliant, great job

Aww this was great! Brilliantly done, and I'm sorry for your loss *hug*

*hug*

A beautiful piece, dear; both touching and heartbreaking. Never let it be said that you haven't got the talent to be a writer; when you try, you have an amazing way with words.

I'm terribly sorry for your loss, and my prayers are with you and your family, as always.

Very good fic, and well written. You are vary talented, and I am sorry for your recent lost. *hugs* *wipes away tear*