Reviews for The Odd Life of Oswin Oriall Oswald |
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Guest chapter 23 . 12/11/2018 NAZIS! |
MaggYme chapter 29 . 6/14/2016 noooooooooooooo! i really like your story ...please continue it,if you ever become bored! |
No-One-Important666 chapter 29 . 3/17/2016 ...I really loved this story and this Author's Note just made my heart plummet, but I am glad to have read what you had up none the less. I really liked how Oswin was quirky and relate-able and looked forward to reading the rest of the adventure with the quirky Miss Oswin, though I am glad to have been able to travel with her thus far. I hope to read more of your stories in the coming future~! |
AshleighRebekah chapter 29 . 7/23/2015 So you're not revisiting this at all? Maybe put that in your summary so people don't get their hope up. I thoroughly enjoyed your story, I found the entire plot line to be very intriguing and was excited to see what you were going to do with it. I have to say I am a bit disappointed, you barely even made it into the second movie. Anyway, enough negative, what you have written is really good and you should be proud that you can produce such amazing writing :) Hoping that you do decide to continue this in the near future though. |
Kitty1098 chapter 29 . 5/3/2015 NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! |
Noxy the Proxy chapter 24 . 5/1/2015 An interesting turn of events. |
Noxy the Proxy chapter 16 . 5/1/2015 Awesome. I wonder if Oswin is truly the last of her kind? |
Sophiehelenee chapter 29 . 1/19/2015 Whaat, no! Whyy whyy |
Lovely chapter 1 . 11/22/2014 You may think I disappeared. But I never left. It been 2? years. And whenever I'm in a Kili kind of mood I come right back here. Oswin Oriall Oswald's story is still one of my favorites ever! 3 |
IIGrumpyMouseII chapter 29 . 11/4/2014 It was a wonderful story while it lasted :) Maybe you could put 'discontinued' in the summary? I was very disappointed when I saw the author's note at the end. As for constructive criticism... a little more passion in the relationship with Kili could be nice. The big reveal about her heritage was awesome :) But a little confusing that could be resolved with more description and back story. Let's see... a little more of her emotions at being displaced then her world being turned upside down would add depth to the story. The character development was nice, but I would like to see her relationships with the company develop as well. Hmm... maybe some embarrassing stories to add a little humor. Overall a very well written story with interesting characters. |
hanzrob2 chapter 29 . 10/16/2014 No! Why?! |
Promise1982 chapter 29 . 5/18/2014 was hoping you continued this soon. it was getting really good. |
Rys-n-ollie mom chapter 15 . 4/4/2014 I cant get the web address to work is it gone? |
MaxRideandPercyJackson4ever chapter 29 . 3/20/2014 YOU JUST BROKE MY HEART YOU MONSTER! (crying on the inside) |
Guest chapter 29 . 3/3/2014 What! This was a great story and your giving it up! Just before she was about to go talk to Thandruil and Leggy?! I was bloody well looking forward to that! Please don't give this up! It was a great story and should be continued plz. :( :3 for me Ps. Did you mean for oswin to be a connection to doctor who? |