Loved this fic, was so much fun.

You are killing me here!

Oh. My. God. Oh. My. God. I know how Chris must have felt, because I can't even rationalize thoughts.

It's clear you didn't proofread this as it's littered with grammatical and mechanical mistakes as well as blatant typos, but frankly, the non-sex in this is worth forgiving all mistakes. It's just brilliantly hot. I feel so cheated out of getting the full-fledged ending sex scene, but it feels appropriate, like you were playing a game with us, the readers - one that you won.

Oh my God. So good. I'll be dreaming about this for a while.

This was amazing! Most Nivanfield is pretty dark, which is fine because it should be, but I like the lighter tone this one had and the ending cracked me up! Wonderful work ;)

Great as always.

amazing. haha. hopefully Piers gets to keep some of his domineering personally in the sheets in your other stories - very sexy.

lol i dont think thats so wise to tease chris like that

that was hot

Perfect ending! Thanks for writing this lovely story!

Amazing ending! Chris definitely didn't expect that xD

Oh man this is perfect! A great ending to an awesome story. I hope there's more Nivanfield up your sleeve because I need more from you! I actually hope you never stop writing these two :D

HAHAHA! That was a fitting end to this story.

I did find one error near the end though:

They bot were, Chris had to deal with a rookie partner, and Piers was off leave in te morning and had to report in.

It should be this:

They both were, Chris had to deal with a rookie partner, and Piers was off leave in te morning and had to report in.

I would love a sequel to this!

I had to review this so that you know how much it makes me squeel. I haven't been able to find that much ChrisxPiers fiction that I like, but this story makes me giggle like a school girl. You cannot write fast enough to please me. Really glad that I found this one, keep up the awesomesauce work :)

Cheers,

I can't leave this chapter without giving a review. I've been waiting for this omg. That brat Piers finally got himself beat ;). God Chris PLEASE go another round xD

Oh ****! My brain has turned into goo... That was so hot! I love how Chris left Piers in the conference room like that. How deliciously evil! Well he had to take Piers down a notch, didn't he? I can't wait to read what happens next! :)