I love the HP reference but the last one and then Pike saying he was his Leonard McCoy was just perfect!

Winona is kind of bitch, she left and didn't even make sure she was a good mother!
Can't wait to know what Pike will think about Jim and Bones together!

I really like Pike's little talk with George! kkk

Loved the last two sentences! Had me cracking up for a whole minute, then chuckling for another couple.

Nah you don't suck at endings you made me into a pile of goo. I'm going aww so sweet! It was awesome.

Love love loved it! Was looking for bones/kirk stuff and came across this. I love fics with pike being fatherly towards Jim. *sigh* I do luff happy endings

This was absolutely incredible. I can't even describe - the chapters are the perfect length, the characters are described so realistically, everything just came together seamlessly. New favorite fanfic! :)

Amazing. Really lovely writing and nice ending. Wish it was longer!

This was such a fun read. There were some grammar errors (mostly a big problem with mixing up your "you're"s and "your"s), but nothing that prevented reader comprehension. I loved this fic. I'm a big sucker for papa!Pike so I was bound to fall for it. Thanks for sharing.

Nicely done ... very sweet.

This just made my day. The fact that Pike knows Jim is George's son by his clumsiness... Well, it made my day. Thank you.

This was a great a story.I hope to read more Star Trek stories from you.

Really like the story. Thank you.

very nice ending!

I like it.

And I think Pike would have always been a good father for Jim, if Winona had allowed him to hang around while Jim was growing up.

Great story! I like the characterization and can certainly sympathize with Pike and his waffling on tell Jim his actual heritage. Looking forward to more! Thank you for sharing you story with us.