Such a bittersweet story-perfect for the ending.

Not much else can be said-thanks for posting this!

Poor Merlin! Can't wait yo read what you do with this. :-)

Amazing piece of work. Really touching. The mantra Merlin clings to shows his despair and the little bit of hope he has. The short descriptions of how Camelot was changing and time was passing gives your story depth.
Nice. I'm looking forward to more.

Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter:)

Ninja:D

Very good start! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes :D