Reviews for Gauntlet: Pain
Logan chapter 5 . 11/19/2011
Mojo is finally dead and Brick too? Amazing comclusion of the third part
Logan chapter 4 . 11/19/2011
Wow. . . Mental battle FTW! I wonder what Bubbles really saw inside.
Logan chapter 3 . 11/19/2011
And it starts! I'm excited for the next chapter and how is the battle going to unfold, specially the 6 way move they are going to make.
Logan chapter 2 . 11/19/2011
I like the calm scenes more than the battle scenes, and this chapter was full of the first so it was an enyojable read. Especially the Rowdyruff's visit to the stripclub.
Logan chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Deep characterization, good writing and a mysterious and well planned story to go with it. My favorite scene of this chapter was the truth or dare game, i though it would end badly because the boys could turn vicious with the dare part but it didn't happen an even laughed a little when Boomer said Pika?
Guest chapter 5 . 9/18/2011
Can you make more preaty preaty please
creativesm75 chapter 5 . 9/27/2008
idiot mojo.
Tain Shari chapter 5 . 10/7/2006
I don't get why you have so few reviews. You deserve a lot more. This is great!
Raven A. Star chapter 5 . 1/12/2004
Awesome! You must continue! I can't wait to read the rest of it!
Almaseti chapter 5 . 9/8/2002
WoW! thats all i can say. i love it.
PIcaRDMPC chapter 5 . 8/18/2002
I love this series! And please tell me Brick didn't actually die! I knew he had a heart underneath all of that coldness. And the way you had ButterButch(my name for the two combined) kill Mojo. Was that influenced by DBZ? Anyway, HURRY UP WITH THE SEQUAL PLEASE!
TweetyCece chapter 5 . 8/17/2002
...

Is This The End?

TWEETYCECE
Juxtaposie chapter 5 . 8/14/2002
Oh my F***! This was great! I ALMOST cried. I can't wait for the next installment! I hope you get it out as soon as you did this one! I'll be waiting, watching, and hoping! Keep up the great work!
SolomonGrundy chapter 1 . 8/7/2002
I just wanted to say that I consider you the premiere fanfiction writer here on . Your stories are written better then many published novels I've read. Brick's brilliance is just so well done, that nothing has been more intriguing and more rewarding to read.

While I salute the romance-less fic (when the characters just jump into the relationships, the fic is ultimately unrewarding to read) it might benefit the story if you just drop a LITTLE hint here or there, at the POSSIBILITY of a romance. Just my opinion though, I was raised on Herb Montes stories, so I've kind of come to expect it.
rockergirl chapter 5 . 8/6/2002
i love this story. your writing is so good. i love the way you protray the rowdyruff boys. this story has a great plot unlike most stories. this is by far the best story i have read. cant wait until the next the story comes out you left us with a major cliffhanger.
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