Hi!
This story is quite interesting. I enjoyed reading it. You did well at writing.

There are quite a small number of A/N only chapters at the endIt was interesting to follow the team through the chase of the killer. A small pointfrom all the things that happened during Harry's school time, it's impressive, but also a little bit coincidental how Harry seems to know exactly which scene the killer will choose.

A solid story here.

You should have continued that authors fic, then posted this one as a sequel.

a continuation of what story sorry? i can't seem to find it, could you send me a link to it please?

Henrietta is known as Hetty to everyone but Granger

Hanna doesn't have a h at the end, and Deeks is an LAPA liason

Enjoyed the story, however, November has only 30 days!

Please, for the love of God, proofread your stories before posting! The Brit-speak is clever but it won't make up for the fact that the typos are making my brain ache. I really, REALLY want to read this story and enjoy it, but you're not making it easy.

The premise is wonderful but your sentence / paragraph structure pertaining to dialog is EXTREMELY difficult to read! PLEASE place ALL sentences spoken by the same person in the same paragraph; when you split a single monolog into separate paragraphs, it becomes almost impossible to tell who's actually speaking. Surely you've read enough fic to know better.

Great story! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

How about calling it potter's Azkaban sequel.

Potter's Mystery Box?

Wow, great story, thank you SO much for writing it.

After the Chamber

ROFL - Owl Mail on Gibbs desk I loved the end