When you gonna keep going with this mate?

Hey, there are horses in minecraft, right? Why is Steve mistaking the Ponies as Creeper? I mean, a horse resembles a Pony much more.

Oh god it’s Herobrine, the white eyed demon himself

Holy Notch’s butter apples it it Notch and herobrine! Please let it be them!

I just reread this fic and it's still pretty amazing. One of the longest, most detailed Minecraft/MLP fics out there. Funny enough I thought I already wrote a review for this but didn't notice it. The story isn't perfect, it's a bit slow with all the points of view swapping to tell each scene from either sides perspective, especially before the language barrier was crossed to some degree. It makes sense and I applaud the effort it took but man did it slow the first few days of the story down to the point it took something like 20 or 30 chapters for time and progress to be made. Still I can't complain I binge read all this in a few days, I can only imagine waiting for updates between chapters. That said the huge downtime between the last update and the huge cliff hanger this story ended on is rather annoying. I's been about 2 years since the lad chapter and it almost felt like this story could almost be done too.

Lyrabon?! I HATE YOU!

Very good

Stupid idiots the lot of them. There was no attack on one of theirs. One of theirs attacked the creature. While the creature kept trying to flee. But nope, they are part of the guard, they can do no wrong. I hope that bucker gets a broken neck from how far his head is up in the clouds of delusional self righteousness.

...poor Steve. Well if he had ANY inclination of trying to communicate that gone now thanks to this dumb bitch randomly attacking him.

Oh well maybe Zecora and he will make a connection and she can get all those dumbasses off his back.

Dumbass guard. Sees Goddess making first contact with creature. Goddess has relaxed posture, not engaged in combat, not even prepping magic on her horn. What's he do? Bucks it all up by yelling at her to get away from it like some dad seeing his 4 year old daughter nearing a poisonous snake.

*facepalm* god damn idiot.

So far, rather dull story. You describe quite a bit. I was actually getting ready to quit this fic when we finally got to read something happening. Only for Capt Hawk to buck it up.

:(

A very nice update. Still little irritated by how the treat the Miner though...

do the first part of the mob rap to introduce the mobs :)

Dr Edmund Sirus,

First of all, sorry about me not logging in, it was before I sign up for this website.
Second, on that day, it was the first time I read this fanfic. I didn't know that you were having a hard time in this story.

So...

Now I understand why this fanfic is not updating. I do hope it would sail smoothly with your plan.
But still... I like the story and the way you insert herobrine into the story without some weird "I'm gonna grief you!" moment.

I have one serious problem with this story. Scenes tend to overstay their welcome. I feel nine time out of ten the paragraphs could have been shorter and a few could've been removed without changing anything meaningful. It is to me atleast, well written for what it is but it feels really sluggish at times.