Casi lloro y que conste que no pasa muy seguido :)

I love this fanfiction. It made me burst into tears, explode of happiness, and even root for everyone. This will hold a dear place in my heart forever. Your story has made me so pleased, you've earned a new follower :)

your making me cry
*sniff*
i love it

Incredibly well written in my opinion and the way you have naruto and the others interact is also well done I love the fact that you have naruto struggle to be what we all know and love him for. A strong dependable man that would go to any lengths to save a friend whether directly or indirectly. Over all a 9/10 I only wish it was longer and that the romance was more part of the story and more thought out.

Update bitch

I abhor the Mob thing because that is such a stupid thing people came up with. Others seem to forget that unless they made Hiruzen a complete monster, that a mob going after Naruto would be impossible since Hiruzen would know right away, ether from his ANBU or from his Ball.

"You were my happy memory."
*sniffle* I'm not crying. You're crying!
*Proceeds to bawl uncontrollably*

Na-minha-opinião-pessoal-Naruto-não-deve-perdoar-a-Sakura,Sasuke,Kakashi-e-Konoha-por-que-sinceramente-depois-que-Naruto-passou-durante-sua-infancia-em-Konoha-e-repugnante-que-fizerão-com-ele

Aw, that was a sweet ending

sakura is a slut, you should have expelled her

them onion ninjas be getting me like

I utterly love this story and my main reason is - it's one of very few stories in general (and even rarer fanfictions) that had made me genuinely cry while reading them. Granted, my emotional state is also not really at it's most stable, but still. It doesn't happen often.

It's probably not going to be a very helpful review since I'm way too emotional to even attempt looking at story consistency and stuff like this (perhaps if I cool off and re-read it some day...). Naruto is amazing here - I am a sucker for a more psychologically probable Naruto (let's face it, no friends and shunned till meeting Iruka should leave Naruto way more messed up then canonical shounen will allow). I also extremely enjoyed how well you kept the balance between waht you show and tell outright and what is only implied, especially in relationships between Naruto, Harry, Ron and Hermione.

So I love this story to bits.

I put my money on Naruto and Harry saying fuck it soon and tearing their ways through those in their way. They are both chosen ones with a great deal of power in them. Both working as a team would be enough to do whatever they want.

this was amazing you should be very proud of yourself for writing this it was amazing.

Omg. Amazing story. Loved it. Is there going to be a sequel. Let me know please.