This was lovely. Please write more Durin family fics. I know that Thorin worries about the boys too.

Angsty indeed. Now I have to think some more about how they're going to die. But from what I remember (and you can correct me if I'm wrong), the Battle of the Five Armies wasn't "planned". I mean the dwarves only thought they'd be facing down the dragon alone. Things just snowballed so that there was a battle between the dwarves, orcs and goblins, and the Elves and Men joined in as well...? Good one shot though :)

Very well written. Fili certainly knows how to settle Kili.

ugh you're killing me. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT ALSDKJFADF.

You did an excellent job keeping Fili and Kili in character, unlike many other fanfictions where the characters seem to lose some of their original personality you seem to be able to keep that image in your head and put it into words. I could totally see this happening just that way, nothing overly emotional just dark and sinister as is their journey. Great job!

*Strokes imaginary beard* Good, very good. I like this.

Beautiful story 3

When I think to what will really happen I fell desperately sad. But that was very cute :)

I love this! Great job!

sigh... why must Tolkien be so.. heartless? Great story, well done. You just have to love the closeness of them.

Ah, this was so sweet! The ending made me tear up though because of what acutally happens to them TTTT I would love to read how you would write their last moments (if that made any sense)

This was so cute and sweet :)

Great story.

Aw, cute Kili is cute. Nicely done. -

I loved the interaction between the brothers :) It's so cute how Fili
tries to comfort Kili .
Thanks for posting :)