* with an eagerness and imaptience you have no idea. and then updates kinda stopped and i forgot about one of my favourite fics, which until then i had re-read multiple times already because i loved it so much. and only now i remembered it and decided i'd have to favourite it and follow the author just in case there'll ever be an update. dont get me wrong, im not calling you out or trying to guilt trip you into updating at all. i fully understand life getting in the way, Inspiration becoming a lost cause and characters just being difficult. whatever your reasons for not updating may be, just know that what you have written so far for this story has given me so much joy and hope and motivation to already be more than enough. i will gladly reread the chapters that are already out and enjoy them just as much as the first time i read them and not want for another thing in my life, i just love it so much! anyway, i just wanted to let you know your fic really stayed present in my mind all these years and will continue to do so for probably the rest of my life. just. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT.

you know, i found this story years ago and fell in love with it pretty much during the first paragraph of the first chapter. back then Updates were already slow but they were coming. and i anticipated each one wi

Just know how much I really want to read the reaction chapter from Yami's pov. I can imagine Marik and Bakura out for blood even more so than Yami!

Great chapter I enjoining reading this story.

Please update. :)

Hahaha poor Joey freaking out but well done with this chapter. :)

Well this story is amazing I love it so much and I love your writing and I know its been a while since you've uploaded but I hope you do I can't express enough how much I love your writing and this story

This story is...utterly amazing...I love the way you way you write, it really draws me into the story and makes me feel like I'm actually in the story with them, it was also really funny, and I can tell you both are very interesting people in real life~ I really hope you continue this story and I bless you for writing this~XD (P.S The last chapter made me cry)

I'm loving this story cannot wait for more! :)

:,( this reminds me of a puppy I had last year... his name was rebel, and he was a chiwawa-beagle mix. My neighbors friend found him in the road at night, and gave him to my friend so that she could find someone to take care of him. We found out that he was around six weeks old, and after non-stop begging my mother, she let us keep him. Wen we went over to her house to pick up the puppy, our mothers talked a while ink(as most of her friends call her) and I played outside with the pup. While we were out there, he repeatedly attempted to break every rule we set, so I dicided to name him rebel. later that day, we took him home. My other dog, snowy, a Maltese, completely refused to aknowlage his existence. The next day, we took him to the vet, and found out that he had hydrocephalus, which is a problem that occurs while a pup is being born, that makes it hard for the cerebral fluids to escape when they need to, making it so that the skull plates can not connect all the way. There is no treatment, and it is fatal. The vet said that there were a few cases where the dog lived, but all of the dogs ended up blind, and almost deaf. I dicided that he was gonna live and refused to admit anything else. I really did believe he was gonna live, because he was looking healthy, and showed no signs of him worsening, such as not eating, walking around like a zombie, (as in not showing emotion, which rebel showed more of than almost any dog I ever saw) and falling over while standing still. We had him a few weeks, we kept him in a box that we filled the bottom of with towels, gave him five of my thousand plushies, and got out snoweys old food and water dish. Rebel frequently played with his plushies, his favorate being a plush bunnie named Easter eggs, it was five times his size, but he loved to play with its feet, and always slept between it's legs. All my friends fell in love with him, almost as much as I did,and we joked that he had his own fandom. I even brought him to my robotics class once, and everyone there fell in love with him to. That night, one of my friends, (I'll just call her swan feather, because that was her first OC,) came over for a sleepover after robotics. She had not seen rebel yet, and was revels first challenge. Swan feather, did not fangirl over him, which made rebel mad. He loved his fan girls. He chased her around nodding her ancles and wining until I came over and cuddled him for almost an hour. His next attempt at her heart, was to bring her every leafs he could find in the yard. After that did not work, he forced himself into her lap, with she did not object to, but still she would not cuddle him and pet him like all his fan girls. The next morning, when swan feather and I took him outside to use the restroom, we noticed him coughing up something. I worried over him for around ten minuets, until hi finished ridding his stomach of his lunch. Swan feather kept attempting to get me to play the Xbox with her afterwards, and I eventually gave in. I spent the rest of that day playing with mostly her, while my mother took care of rebel. I still stopped to fangirl over my pup every once and a while, but eventually got caught up in the games we were playing. That night, rebel started shaking. He would not move. His breath was uneven, his body was warmer than usual, and he would not even wine. As soon as I walked into the living rip to see him like this, my heart was crushed. We invited my grandfather over, he brought some sort of thing that the vet recommended to give him energy to heal, and we gave it to rebel almost immediately when he walked in the door. It seemed to work, when rebel lifted his head, and started Making noise again, but once my hopes were up that he may live, he died in my arms. He took his last breath, and I felt the warm heart that had been beating against my chest for the past hour slowly stop beatng. The next day, we dug a grave for him near a holly bush, I sent a message to all his fan girls, and I sat in my room crying for the rest of the day.

Sorry for the long review that was hardly even related to the story, but here is some stuff that is actually related.
This chapter contained on of veery few fictional deaths that have actually brought the tears that built up in my eyes to actually fall without me forcing them to, and it certainly earned the most of them.

O.O I'm liking this so far.

hi ummm u said that u use wattpad more, n ik that in the pervious few chapters ago u said about ur wattpad name. but when i put that in there is alot of the same name, can u give me ur username or send me the link of ur name? also did u continue this story there? since u said u dont have much time on this website. love ur story! hope u can help out thxs! ;)

Love the story keria so plz continue!

Hey... are you alright...? You mentioned going through some touch things... I know we don't know each other, but i'm kind of worried about you, you haven't updated this story in a while...

Hey, I just wanted to say I truly love this story. The way you portray the characters is beautiful. I haven't read a Yugioh fic in a long time, and as I was thinking about reading some, yours came to mind as one of the best ones I've read on this site. I've been rereading it for the past week, to catch up and I fell in love with it all over again. Please update it again real soon, it makes me wanna write again. When I get a laptop I will. So I'm looking forward to the next chapter.