Hmm... seems like this between the OC & L are moving at speed too fast the is neither normal in real life or for L's character. Though L is pretty OC in this. I expect L to be more clueless and inept with romance or most other relationships both personal and professional.

First of all, I thought the story was awesome so whoever made those cruel comments is a dumbass. Don't listen to them. I enjoyed the story. I got the feeling of the OC just fine and even tho L was just a little out of character at some points it wasn't overly major but the story over all is very good. And I very much look forward to reading the sequel. I hope it's finished soon. Thank u for ur enjoyable stories. They help me so much through my days to just get lost in a life and world that isn't mine.

NOOOOOO!

Wait they did it on the roof? Awesome!

No! Don't let him die!

Wow she really went through something...

Awww! Girlfriend! I love this story so much!

Awe L! You're such a sweetheart!

Save Mello too...

She needs to tell him! Tell him! Please don't kill L off!

Oh L...

Save him! Please save him! Or kill Light. Actually do both!

Finally! I wish I was her right now haha! Great chapter

Thirteen? Hmm...

Matsuda you idiot.