This was beautifully written! As well as sad. We love this couple so much.

That was sweet.

omg that was amazing. i loved it!

so sweet and sad.

I like it it so sweet

Awesome...
You know what, Mashima need to give Jellal and Erza their happy ending.
I've waited long enough! (I'm a hard core Jerza shipper).
Plus, those two have gone through so much already.
I swear, if those two don't get married in the anime, I'll got crazy.
And then I'm gonna go give Mashima a piece of my mind...

- Warrior Phoenix

this could be canon. Gee hee. (Gajeel's laugh) XD thank you for writing this. :D

Awww, I love it! Jerza FTW! :)

so sweet! keep up the so good work and stay golden! love it! a sequel pls? oh no. m greedy. XD
well, this remembered me of a pic... you know, the one in which Erza and Jellal kissed in the night sky... which is also my one fic's cover... haha! well, keep it up.

I can't belive. Such a heart-warming and sweet fic ! I got Jerza feels from it. Really !

The moment he embraced her! And then he confessed to her ! And she confessed to him ! So cute x3
Goodbye kiss was just perfect. I'm waiting like an eternity for that to happen in the manga. Hiro ! Let them have their happy ending already !

Anyway, your story goes to my favorites. Kinda sad it's one-shot though, cause it's too wonderful to end now. Make sequel or new story with Jerza, please !

I love it! :3

Really nice and sweet story. I really enjoyed it...Jerza rocks! And I absolutely loved the last few lines.
Keep up the good work!

Ahhh FINALLY a good jerza fic :)

WAAAAHHH! O.M.G! Okay I fangirl squealed soooo bad! AHHH My gosh I can't stop squealing! These two wrote the book on LOVE! loved this story. Puts comfort in the heart. I hope Hiro Mashima reads this to get a few ideas on how they should get together ;)

is there chap 2? OMG this is the first time that read JeRza fic! i like it!