OMG this is the best one on Rory as the Master. YOu need to write a sequel. WRITE IT NOW!

This is the best Rory as the Master story. Ever. No doubt about it. Absolutely.

(The only way to make it better would be to expand it, hint hint, but I dunno, maybe the best way is to leave it open like that.)

awesome I love stories about Rory being the master and yours was awesome!

Please update soon! I really enjoy this story! Don't tell anyone, but I'm secretly psychopathic. I have an ingenious plan to take over the world.
Bwahahahahaha!
(just kidding! I just have a thing for the Master... sometimes? All the time? The End of Time? I don't know!)

o.o Can you write more? You are positivly Fantastic!

Ohh how I wish this wasn't a oneshot! This is really good and I just love Master!Rory and the tenth doctor. I wish there were more stories with those two

Yay
I really Enjoy these type of stories(Rory is secretly the Master stories)
and I liked this one alot !

This is all I have to say: Update )

Gaaaaah! Why must you leave it like this! I mean, no, actually, I understand perfectly (as a writer) why this one-shot is just a one-shot but as a person I am in deep, deep pain at the moment with the conclusion of this story.

This is an absolutely amazing fic. It was the perfect balance of having no clue what was going on and minor hints scattered throughout the fic. The best part of reading/watching any book or movie is having no idea what's really going on until the very end 'reveal' moment which has you staggered at how perfect it is, because you didn't see it coming even though you had all the clues. I don't know how much of what I just said makes sense, but you accomplished it all and I applaud you for an excellently written fic. I can't wait to read more of your writing.

No. Rory. Don't . . . *sob*

Sorry, Rory-Master stories always send me over the edge with despair.

Oooooo that was great! Rory as the Master. They are such different people. I wonder how that would work especially since Rory has over 2000 years of memories.

This is really, really good! I was incredibly anxious reading it, until the ending and I was so frustrated (but a good "your story is amazing this exactly how it should be" frustrated) that it ended there.

wow. I loved the idea behind this...great job

Wouldn't the Doctor (11) know what is happening to Rory? If he was watching Rory in his tenth regeneration, he surely would remember him the first time they see each other. Anyway, is a good story :)