While a lot of the early chapters feel either too fast paced or have peculiar word choices. The middle to the end gets better and better in quality. Some scenarios in this have been quite humorous.

How can harry develop spirit sight from blood not his own? That's a bad explanation. He could say exposure to spirit particles or if it's a secret just say he learned from his family not that it's a family trait. Lazy

Maybe he should ask for training, swords could be useful.

and then Donny comes to Haru's house to be his loving devote servant who gets on fabulously with the rest of the family.

I thought you said Ichigo was only a year older? This would make him at least 3 years older.

toshiro us going to flip his lip when he meets isshin

"YOU'RE ALIVE!?"

"n-now shiro let's not do anything drastic"

"YOU LEFT ME IN CHARGE OF MATSUMOTO! YOU UTTER BACK STABBING BASTARD! I'LL MAKE SURE YOU'RE DEAD FOR REAL THIS TIME SHIBA!"

I like this story. Keep it up! :)

You know that it is Football, except USA everyone says Football.

sounds like something Draco would do and just show up.

yeah, Tom's soul is now gone from Harry. Maybe they will use it to track down the rest of the pieces.

The relationship you seem to have with your mother is oddly amusing yet heartwarming. If this is something in all of your stories, I'll need to start taking insulin before looking at them.

Also, I wouldn't be surprised if Toshiro weaponizing his cuteness backfired. Sure, Matsumoto does her paperwork now, but he's now accidently become the Seiretei's newest heart throb.

Oh it hurts so much, I'm laughing so hard that I can barely breath. My sides hurt from too much laughter and I can't stop the tears from falling down ny face because of the lack of air. But I cant wait to read more of this story in the future.

Lol fkin Draco haha bitch I'm a delight haha

thanks for updating this its really funny and a great pick me up when you need to laugh

Interesting chapter and plot and idea