Reviews for New Game Plus
ManticoreBlues chapter 2 . 2/1
hope your still writing
Tryson chapter 2 . 4/3/2019
No please do tell more Sure Mr. Popo would love to listen
NecroticR chapter 2 . 12/13/2018
(NecroticRitualist) This is amazing and I need MORE RIGHT NOW!
Chrono Phoenix chapter 2 . 11/12/2018
Must continue.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/12/2018
If you're still working on this, I vote Orochimaru. He's alive the longest out of Naruto's major villains, so he wouldn't need to be caught up to speed nearly as much, and he has the most potential to generate bonus allies if he's feeling up to it. Pein has Konan and the Rain Village, yeah, but we never really heard a lot about them. Obito can choose to be less of a catalyst than he already was, but the gears are already turning, and Black Zetsu is perfectly capable of replacing him or doing whatever he wants anyway. Itachi could make Sasuke's life easier, but he can't do much more than that.

Out of existing allies that were never major (note: major. Not minor. Heheh) villains, Gaara would likely be the best bet, as Naruto's going to have a harder time persuading him this time around since he can't prove he ever suffered for being a Jinchuuriki, unless you have plans for that. Plus, it's nice to have a Kage in the know before they even hit adulthood. Jiraiya is doable, since I'm sure Naruto would want to catch up with him and give him a chance to see the peaceful future Naruto helped to achieve, but I don't see Future!Jiraiya's presence having a significant effect on the way things will play out. Naruto can get the frog summons sooner, yeah, but Jiraiya himself did not ultimately do very much to impact canon during Naruto's generation beyond that and his death. He was noticeably more relevant in his own prime — training Nagato, training Minato, so on and so forth.

Tsunade would be easier to persuade with her memories intact but I think she'd rather just not relive all that. She'd maybe have a chance to say yes to Jiraiya this round, but beyond that, what would she gain from reliving it? Shikamaru would be great to have on hand, so it's an option on the table. Plus, I think he might want to save Asuma and his dad.

Yeah, no, my brain keeps coming back to Orochimaru, honestly. After the Chuunin exams, every other villain was Orochimaru at the end of the day, so he honestly has the most input on the direction of the series. He'd also make a great subplot (or more) if he decides in the end to go back to being a villain or otherwise be way too shady. I vote for Orochimaru!
Arsenal chapter 1 . 7/21/2018
No no no no. There is no good reason to reveal his video game powers or his ability to restore memories of past lives. Do not do this
Ntraveler chapter 2 . 5/19/2018
please do continue if you are still interested in doing this story
Primus2021 chapter 2 . 3/13/2018
It might be better if the 'Dungeons' were Under a "Time Dilation Field" so that once the 'Players' leave the 'Dungeons' the 'Players' are then returned to their "Point of Origin" at the exact time that they were teleported into the 'Dungeon', that way no one "Flips their Shit" when the 'Players' vanish.
Primus2021 chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
I found something odd here ... you have the Kumo-nin saying that Naruto is 5 when he's saving Hinata, and yet before that you have Sakura's dad thinking that Naruto and Sasuke are 8 and that it's after the Uchiha slaughter, so which is it?
Shonisto chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
how about using one of the memiors on Hiruzen, oh and will he be able to earn more?
Have a Little Feith chapter 2 . 6/29/2017
It's been a while since this was updated, are you going to update it anytime soon? This was fun to read, by the way. I especially loved the NaruHina bits (They are absolutely adorable together in this)!
SnappingFlower chapter 2 . 5/23/2017
[Mark]

I'm waiting.

~Snappy~
Darksnider05 chapter 2 . 1/23/2017
That was cool but I'm curious about something, do they not feel the physical effects of changing their stats or see the physical changes? Their muscles should be moving under their skin rapidly or they should be getting taller as put stats in vit. Just curious if your going to get into the physical changes the gamer system should cause to someone moving around their stats.

On the whole scrolls thing that they find shouldn't they copy the techniques with Naruto's clones and hand them out to everyone and start creating a library with master copies of said techniques. Their all jonin level ninja's so they should be aware of how to maintain scrolls and gather intel. Seems like they could do some good by being able to offer people scrolls filled with techniques that they can level at their leisure by simply writing them down.

Seems like something Naruto would be really good at considering his families sealing which requires calligraphy.

Looking forward to next chapter.
Darksnider05 chapter 1 . 1/22/2017
"Indeed. Until then, you'll be training in here to 'regain' your old abilities and perhaps adapt them to your new body. With one major difference: you will be learning more jutsu. Face it, kit, all you know is Kage Bunshin and Rasengan and its wind element version. We need to expand your repertoire or you'll become stagnant."

This is really untrue and just doesn't make sense. By the time Naruto was an adult he was the foremost greatest at chakra shape manipulation, had the ability to regenerate other people's organs and share his chakra to empower them, was the most powerful sensor on the planet. Learning various ninjutsu for him would be a cute joke as a hobby. He'd be better off spending his life mastering all types of crafting/sealing as it'd have more impact on his every day life. I have no idea why Kurama would even suggest that as being important. The most powerful shinobi in history, clearly he was doing something wrong and needs "jutsu" teh fuck.

Ignoring that why would Kurama's chakra be corrosive if he's not hateful and willingly sharing it with Naruto. So that doesn't make sense so no need for emo red glowing body melting power ups.

Everything else is really cool but man let's have some perspective like Sasuke said. Anything they learn while in this life is purely a hobby which is cool. Their not going to get "stronger" they can refine what they know. But stronger at this point is like "can I punch the moon to death in one hit or two?". If anything empowering their friends and families and just in general spending their lives helping the people they came to care for seems like it should be the goal.

Cure Anko's seal and train her to be strong enough to kill Orochimaru and take the Snake contract from him for her. Help Asuma get stronger so he doesn't die on Kurenai. Cure Itachi's sickness and bring that fool home or something. Maybe save Konan and her idiot boyfriend.

So much stuff they can do for their loved ones like Kakashi,Tsunade,Jiraiya. They all had ok lives but they were pretty boned from the past.

Kinda curious why Naruto would ever want random X bloodlines beyond screwing around. Don't think his mom would appreciate her son showing up with X bloodline when he's basically all that's left of her Husband and Clan. Guess you could get some angst off that but yeah would think Naruto would be mature enough to nix that even if he plays around with it in private.
Alex2909 chapter 2 . 11/23/2016
love how the group is doing
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