I love it! Your writing style and characterisations are awesome. The plot is also very original and I love the fact that Alex is seeing Julius. You are an amazing writer - thanks for sharing!

Please update this is awesome and I love it! I want to know why there was a dead guy in his room, though I think maybe Sanders was in there looking for him, then was killed somehow, or someone tried to frame Alex. Please update so I can find out!

While in great need of proofreading, this story has an excellent plot developing.

Hi,
ouh, it doesn't seem great for Alex. I wonder how this will go on. Please update soon, I'm looking forward to reading the continuing. When will Ziva realise that this is her former partner Alex? What will happen with Julius? That is a really great idea, I'd love to read where this will be going

Good when's the next one coming

Updates Please!

Please update soon! This story is really interesting!

Cool! Please update soon!

And Alex's next question will be who?

If u have writers block I have a idea lieutenant Johnathan standers could be scorpia

next chapter please

this is really good, cant wait for the next chapter;D

there is no excuse for why you haven't updated in nine months. Have gibbs interogate him after tony

hi this has potential to be great you just need to make sure that he is set out to be the bad guy for a few chapters and alex should show them how he can figure out what they are thinking and stuff about there personal life with his freaky spy skills of reading their then they should find out all the stuff he's done for MI6 and how the team will need him if they want to catch the killer whoever you want him to be.

Super good! I love it! Update soon! :)