more whens chapter 3 comin i like this so far and wats the plan?

I like it but it could of used a glimps at what happened to Ron, and where's Rufus?

Well the story looks interesting so far but I'm kind of hoping that you will make longer chapters.

Good

good work

Nice story

Interesting. Let's see what you do with this. Oh, and good work with the frying pan Shego!

Now don't go all 'Mary-Sue' on us...

Nothing more from Ron, other than he's dressed to the Nine's, depressed and nonreactive to any threats made to him by one of the most dangerous women in the world...Ok, something happened between Ron and Kim...

And does Drakken think he's going to succeed against Team Possible when I get the vibe that the Team is no more...and Ron isn't going to go to the dark side regardless of what ended his association with Kim...

CB73

Tough sell, but lets see how you do it.

CB73
Welcome to KP.

Well nice Shego point of view chapter but stop keeping us in the dark and finialy let Ron say something! I hope next chapter will be longer too

Tiene potencial actualiza please

Really? What the hell. You did not need to do some sort of stupid Author's note crap. That took up most of the story. I was expecting a chapter,not your imagination going wild. If you ever do update,I hope to hell you keep this author's note crap to a minimum. This was ridiculous. Especially with how short this was.

This is more of a preview or even a tease. I think your Author Note tomfoolery was longer than the actual chapter..

interesting srory is there going to be a chapter 2

There is not much to say about this story yet, because as you have pointed out, it is rather short. Just leaving this review here to encourage you to continue this story, then maybe I would say some flattering things.

p.s. The character ANs and end note are kinda entertaining, but a little corny at times.