the emotional rollercoaster this story had me ride was unbelievable. Me, a 18 year old serving with the U.S. Army, feeling some type of way within the first 3 chapters. crazy. I thank you for writing this. Honestly 100/10.

Why are people so autistic and write fanfics involving lemons that make children suicidal because of ruined childhoods? Does anyone even care for children? Children don't like what adults do in their spare time and neither do I. Because of you bronies, you'll make every children in the world kill themselves from depression and I actually nearly tried to kill myself earlier today just to get away from what I hate in life because of lemon fanfictions. Think about this for a second, do any of you have children in your homes who hate adult content? Because if you do, they'd already be dead by now.

before i continue this story i would just like sto say out of af all the storys ive read this is the best one keep up the good work

Entrancing, I couldn't stop reading. Although I will stop here, because I sense a cliff hanger in the next chapter. I'll start my 2nd read through and let these characters stay in their comfortable position until there's more to read :) (I hope there will be more)

I can't say how much I love this fanfic, the amount of feels(bruh) that it made me go through was fantastic. The characters were completely believable and I could imagine everything that happened. Just magical. Keep it up!

Definitely one of my favorite fan fictions! I can't stand how cute they are are! I hope you'll come back for more writing sometime.

Haha It was everything, the id,hope you're it,be,good job mate make season 2 plZ

Oh MyGod,...this is one of My favorite fanfics of My favorite ship, I love your writting skills, they are so perfect! I'll be waiting for your next awesome chapter,...take all the time you need, just don't forget about us, your fans 3
I've started reading this Fic like 1 month ago (stupid school!) And I just falled in love with your Fic.
Greetings from Mexico!
See ya'

Mother of cliffhangers!
My heart is pounding and i don't like what i think is going to happen(pls for everything thats sacred,dont make a rape scene,sweet flutters has suffered enough).
Awesome fic anyway,keep the good work /)

You have me intresed what next dont disapoint us.

Here in a flash gone without a trace hidde thy sole and find the up the good work

Oh my god, this was dark in the end...
Please update soon, I'm on edge after that cliffhanger
Keep up the brilliant writing style!

oooohhh this is so nervousiting please keep flutters safe .-. -_-
...yay...

How dare you show up out of nowhere and make me have so many feels T_T. Then to leave it on such a dramatic cliffhanger, how rude. Jk, but seriously this was a great chapter. I love all the description and way you tell the story. Can't wait until the next one.

NO!i saw it coming but still no!

Nice to see an update. Can't wait for the next one!

Thank you for update it has been a while