wonderfully written. i think i loved the small detail of the lullby best, though the first paragraphs describing how BADASS unohana was works, too. and the still-matching heartbeats.

That is beautiful.

Awesome, could you please continue this into the series of oneshots exploring their inner darkness ,like in this one and if you' d change POV's then it would be quite interesting.
Keep up writing, and please tell me what do you think about this idea .

Beautiful, i absolutely love KenUno, but canon is not in the agenda of Kubo-sensei. This was beautiful :)

Whew! Great story! Actually I never read the chapter, so I really enjoy it. Never knew kenpachi have that kind of relation with unohana in past.

! This is exactly the story I needed after the first 520 revelation. The prose, the emotional core, the way you've weaved possibilities together. I love it.

Beautiful. And there is nothing else I can say.

Beautiful. This is such an amazing exploration of how the two meet and interact. I love the comments about loneliness from each of them.
Well done on a great story.

This is beautifully written! Amazing job :)

I absolutely love your story :) great job!

I LOVE your story!That's pretty much how I imagine, hope to see new stories about them. :)

OMG I love your story!

I like it. I don't really have much to say, except that I really like what you wrote here. That was well done.

Thanks for sharing !

loved it! very very well written!

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

Just like 523 blew my mind, so does this.

Well done.