Really sorry but, this is the same chapter as the last with an extra paragraph tacked on. Sorry to break it to you :P

Gosh darn it . Please update

Chapter 7 and 8 are the same, I am not sure if someone already mentioned it. Not sure if it was a fanfiction error- cause those happen way too much.

Thank you for what there is of this story so far, it has a lot of elements that are unique and enjoyable to read. I am not sure where you were planning on going with it, I hope someday you feel inspired (and not annoyed) to finish it, or set it and your plan up for adoption, because it is quite good.

great stuff when they fuck each other?

Could you PLEASE update,the suspension is cracking me

Huh, interesting start.
I am holding back my writing/grammar comments.
So Hiccup is 17 in this?

It was asom you rote well

Yo update please

Key I was wondering if u ever plan on righting another story on How To Train Your Dragon

If I had to take a guess, I'd say that Key is the girl that saved Hiccup twice, then died. She's sorta watching over him, offering advice and helping him. Bit creepy, but sweet. Hope you'll come back to this!

continue ive been here since the begining and i need to know what happend woth him and astrid

I live in Ontario Canada

Hey I really enjoyed your story and was very interested by where the story was leading with your ideas and I hope you post more because I would really like to know how it ends

that escalated quickly overall like the story

you need to right more Bru it's good