| Reviews for Once We Were Angels |
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  Blazimgfury05 chapter 4 . 7/18/2019 Well I think thr gallactic slugs have had enough time to travel thr universe, mate, and read this before it has gotten another update |
 Jase1223 chapter 1 . 7/12/2018 I know you hate chichi, but honestly this didn't even seem like ChiChi bashing, I was on chichi's side the whole argument honestly. |
| STOP chapter 1 . 2/11/2015 i like the story but in any new stories you make don't use the stupid Vegeta-Sama or anything like that if you write in English you use the English versions not the stupid fucking Japanese version. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/3/2014 Where's the next one man. But this was awsoem |
| Chidori861 chapter 1 . 1/23/2014 OMG! How I loved the beginning. You had me in tears, I just love Goten. I look forward to the rest. |
| saiyansecret chapter 4 . 10/6/2012 Vegeta/Goten is my OTP, so there are bonus points already. ;) I liked this story, though the ending suggested that more drama is on the way. There's still lots of tension with Trunks as well as with Goku & Chi-Chi. I was still waiting to see what happens next, so I'm wondering/hoping if there will be a sequel. Personally I find lots of chemistry between Vegeta & Goten, so I appreciate when other people see them as I do. I hope there will be a sequel or that you'll write more about them! _ |
| RebornPhoenix05 chapter 4 . 3/11/2012 Once we were giant winged pancakes! Good and yay for bad ass Goten but really? He's not that bad! In your story I mean. Poor Trunks! Update soon! |
| Kfan026 chapter 3 . 9/25/2010 awesome! |
| B chapter 4 . 4/6/2010 please continue this story, its really good and I really really want to know what happens next. |
| Android-2217 chapter 4 . 4/8/2008 OMG Evil Goten is so hot. *clings to author* Update! |
| OCDdegrassi chapter 4 . 7/29/2007 Omg, i loved it. I wish you would update! |
| kala chapter 4 . 6/9/2007 hmm... the plot thickens!;) update soon! |
| skimmie chapter 4 . 2/11/2007 update |
| PopFlyGov chapter 1 . 1/24/2007 This is quite interesting. I absolutely loved how Vegeta and Bulma argued over the phone; it was a gut busting experience. In fact, Vegeta is so in character that it's funny. However, I'm sort of curious in a sense as to why Vegeta would be interested in teaching Goten, son of a low-class Saiyan. I mean, it's not a bad thing, but at the same time, it's the only thing about the first chapter that just doesn't feel like it fits. Oh well, I'll keep reading anyway, cause you do a great job of writing. It's so fun. |
| pemphetru chapter 4 . 3/1/2006 Oo o my god... this is so awesome! real cool! update! |
