This is a very stupid story. Full of crap but what make it worst is the 3 to 4 lines and then call it chapters. All of them united make 3 chapters as all dead story it just stupidity.

Dont us wiki and the animagus is not the same as the portions charm as the portions charm can change where the animagus can not

No need longer chapters

Please continue the story

Clean up the grammar, it's shit. Also, put more detail into it. Other than that, a good story.

I do really love the story it's better than the rewrite but you still need to run a grammar checker

I'm drunk as a skunk and I think this story is a brilliant! Wanna see more!

I like your story hope you get back to it soon.

update please

Why would he go back to Privet Drive?

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. I hope you keep up your great work.

Thank you,

Terri

you do know that the Animagus form being the patronus is wrong because snape has a doe patronus and I do not think that his form would be a doe

it's saved from most poison's not potions ... Other than that it seems to me they're not capitalizing on the chance to RE-Do things..

Harry hasn't thought once about Sirius or breaking that contract with Ginny that Dumbles set up. He's just going with the flow.

please update

I cant wait to see where you go with this story