Reviews for Diner |
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![]() ![]() ![]() CUTE! So precious! Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Le Gasp! That was awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe! loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did Batman not know Jason smoked ...cute story |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww! that was cute! X-) i have an idea to throw at you! jason/robin and barbara/batgirl are on patrol, all night robin flirts with batgirl but all he gets is a big sisterly hug and an ice cream cone in return? |
![]() ![]() Haha aww this is so cute! love it :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! Little snippets of family life are wonderful reads. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I'd love to read a second chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! Loved Dick and Jason brotherly bonding! I hope you write more like this! Maybe with Batman having to rescue his boys because they got too cocky and snuck off to take down a villain on their own and then Bruce goes all daddybats on them and ends up grounding them for their recklessness |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaaww so cutesy :PP lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() D'awwww so cute. And trust me Dickk, your lines were that cheesy haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw cute! Family fluffy bonding! Please do more little oneshots this is really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is so cute :) I needed that, thank you! I appreciated the way you described Jason, he's totally IC. He's the character that I liked the most, because it's good to see sometimes his "good times"; but Dick skills as a big brother always make me squeal because he's adorable, I loved his behaviour in this fic. I didn't expected the end, it surprised me in a good way because we must always remember that in those times even Bruce was thoughtless sometimes and he could be happy with both his sons. I really liked your writing. So if I have to suggest you how improve yourself I'd say that you should keep on like this. Bye :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooo fluffy! i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed the story! You could turn this into a series if you want and introduce other bat characters, all fleeing in droves from Bruce's parties to a diner. Poor Alfred's stuck at home though |