I like it very much. Lots of noice.

Wait, why does her family love in hammerfell? I thought she was a Breton?

Ahhh,how I love the doctors cheerful attitude.

Hmm, unfinished story over 3 years old. No matter how interesting the story line has been so far, it's still unfinished and unlikely to become magically complete. Once again, I wonder why I bother reading FanFiction. :(

Okay, good story.
Well, here's the good parts: The Dialogue itself is good, as well as the plot development. The description is good but could use a bit more detail in some areas.
The not-so-good: The *structure* of the Dialogue. You've got the Dialogue all bunched together when you really should put each speaker in his/her own paragraph.
For example:
WRONG - "Dialogue" "Dialogue" speaker does something "Dialogue Dialogue Dialogue" speaker does something "Dialogue" See how confusing this is
CORRECT -
"Dialogue" Speaker A
"Dialogue" Speaker B
speaker A does something
"Dialogue Dialogue Dialogue" speaker B does something
"Dialogue" Speaker A
Much better and less confusing.

Why aren't there more

Good story so far, but can I just say, the Khajiit didn't make skooma. The Khajiit initially used moon sugar as a medicinal item, but the Dunmer found it and refined it into skooma.

I like your story and where it's going on. The way how you handled Ten's character is good, I recognize him very well, and Jane is cool the way how she's acting is nice, I like her. The story so far is interesting and I'm really looking forward to see what will happen next in the future. Keep up the good job !

really like this story! : the falmer make me sad.

He got a centurion's on their side.

The Doctor saw how the Falmar came to be from Snow Elfs, didn't he?

Glad you're back! College can get pretty overwhelming, so it's good that you've figured it out by now (or you'd be screwed). Great chapter! I will probably go back and reread your story because it's been so long, but I do remember that you write the Doctor really well. Can't wait for another update.

when will you continue this? this is great. and maybe that thing about the dovahkiin turning into a dragon was a reference to the end of oblivion (warning of a spoiler)

where martin septim breaks the amulet of kings and turns into akatosh.

absolutely fantastic.

This is really amazing. Perfect capture of 10 in the world of Skyrim.

Well done. Hope you're working on more, cause I would love to read it.

I like your story! Tamriel is do much fun to play in with the Doctor. Anything is possible! I know you haven't updated in ages, but I really hope you do. Jane is a really neat character, and I want to learn more about her.