Reviews for Dichotomy of the Soul
Danny Williams chapter 5 . 1/27
This is a great story (but you are a monster Note: you have not updated in 5 years and left your fans with a cliff-hanger).
Danny Williams chapter 5 . 5/22/2019
Have read this spin-off several times(enjoyed each time).
Know you have other fan fiction that you work on.
but I think you owe it to your fans to update every once and while.
Last updated Aug 2015 (give us a break)!
Danny Williams chapter 5 . 7/16/2018
Very good(each time I read seems to get better), needs a long awaited update.
You seem to be very busy with all of your stories (but three years is a long wait time).
Danny Williams chapter 5 . 4/20/2018
Enjoyed all 5 chapters (well written and keeps you on edge of seat).
More hard hitting romance would add to the thrill.
Hopefully you will release some more chapters soon.
Danny Williams chapter 5 . 3/23/2018
The break off of Hinata is different and extremely well done.
I see that it has been a while since you undated the story.
I believe that all of us would very much appreciate an update of several chapters or completion of the story.
QueenDeadPool chapter 5 . 2/16/2018
Great story hope it continues.
Avery Datukon chapter 5 . 1/7/2018
Dude, they way you constructed this fix is very interesting. A lot of original stuff especially when it comes to Hinata. I also admire how you put up the romance building, it's subtle but it's enough. It's already 2018 haha, I hope you find the time to update your fics please.
JB the Seeker of Stars chapter 5 . 11/3/2017
I just read this story for the first time. I really enjoyed it and I honestly thought you did a brilliant job with Naruto and Hinata. I really hope you'll continue this story soon. If not, can you give it to someone else? I think your story is too good to die.
theeyethatwatchesoverall chapter 5 . 7/27/2017
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update
Geralt the wolf chapter 5 . 7/19/2017
It's been almost 2 years are you going to continue writing?
cespericueta35 chapter 5 . 6/6/2017
WTF finish this
ATLCMPRNK chapter 5 . 5/17/2017
You can't just leave a cliffhanger like that for almost 2 years! This better be one of the stories you will update next as it, HH, and MITRD are my favorites. So I better know how Naruto wins in a few weeks or I'm gonna be mad! To be honest, I'd prefer you take your time and make sure the chapter is the way you want it to be before you release it. But I also want it to be out as soon as possible... that's the effect of a good writer.
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 5 . 4/17/2017
As always another awesome story that hasn't been updated in such a long time. I hope your still around and I hope you can add more to this sometime soon
arsenicminds chapter 5 . 12/11/2016
I am so sad. I've re read this book again and still wishing for an update. love the idea and hate the cliff hanger sigh.
OnGuard chapter 5 . 10/9/2016
What exactly do you think bijuu means?
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