Which December? Pfft, just kidding.
For real though. I really like this!

I really like your writing style! But I do have one bit of constructive criticism, when you write, you should write a first draft then cut out parts that don’t contribute to the story or are just confusing, it would help the plot seem less all over the place. But that’s just my opinion and ideas, you do you!

I really love this story, but your French is simply horrid. I had trouble reading it. Maybe you should find a beta that actually speaks the language. However, besides that, this fanfic is incredible and I really love it.

I don't think Pitch could handle Jokul, Jack was too strong for him at that point, and Jack normally holds himself back so that he doesn't loose control of his powers. Jokul would have none of that restraint, and I doubt he would have Jacks fears either, so Pitch couldn't control him with those. With Jokul not holding back, I think Pitch would not be able to stop him, and, as he's evil, I doubt he would want to work with Pitch. He would instead go off doing his own thing (you know, freezing people to death, burying them in avalanches, freezing everything around him to the point where they shatter) so, you know, much too powerful and strong-willed to work with Pitch.

I-it's been years sense then-

Great story please update soon thank you
From FredWeasleyWillLiveForEver

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

i cant wait to see the next chapter

Mim is just annoyed af

This story is very good, you are quite talented. Never stop writing your very good.
:-)

ITS HAS BEEN SO MUCH LONGER PLEASE UPDATE IM BEGGING YA

I’ve been crying ever since I started reading chapter one! My blanket and pillow is covered in tears! This story is heartbreaking, yet heartwarming! It brightened my own mood. When are you going to update this again? It’s amazing!

Are ya gonna keep updatin'? Been a while, mate.

I have been crying since chapter one! Why do you do this to me?! Why did I do this to me?! My pillow is soaked from my tears! *sobs*

superb!~~~~~~