Reviews for Broken
Thecrazyfriend chapter 6 . 5/30
Wow this is great! I think you've really caught the thoughts and feelings of both Ahsoka and her worried parents. Poor Ahsoka:( I'm happy she had a happy ending and that asshat Windu was put in his place by Yoda.
I hope you're doing better with your own struggles, you can always PM me if you want
bella chapter 1 . 4/21
I hope you're feeling better now love. I really enjoy your fanfics! 3
124gp96cdx5 chapter 5 . 4/17
I cried as I read this. It cuts to the heart, and left me thinking. Thinking about how good I have it. Thank you.
124gp96cdx5 chapter 6 . 4/15
I think that this tory is fantastic! It has a nice balance(ha! Balance!) of whump and other things. Things like courage, heart, peace, and...depression. It's basically the Star Wars saga, in a fanfic, if you look at the never give up parts.
HowlingWolfSoul chapter 1 . 4/6
I'm a cutter as well, so it kinda relieves me to see, that I'm not the only one you know? So thank you, especially since it's a character I've known and loved all my life that's making it easier :)
Sally chapter 6 . 3/30
Amazing story. Keep writing your good at is. And remember your never really alone
ClandestineCat chapter 6 . 3/24
Thank you so, so much for writing this. I know it’s been forever, and you probably won’t see this, but I want to say just in case;

This was so amazingly written. You seemed to capture the thoughts and feeling that come with depression amazingly, and although the story was sad it gave a message of hope. This story does an amazing job at raising awareness, and I can’t express how grateful me (and so many others I’m sure) are to you for writing it. I’m not bad with depression myself, but I have a friend who really suffered from it (and is getting better!) so I appreciate the message you’re sending. I can’t express how brave you are to write about it using your own experiences, and I’m glad you’ve been fighting it. Idk how you’re doing now, but I hope you’re at least a little better, as every little bit helps! This may come off a bit creepy since I don’t know you, but still, I’m proud of you! Keep fighting! Thanks so so much!
TheExiledOfCamelot chapter 6 . 2/11
Help is good, it always is, hmm. Even when not wanted.
Seliki chapter 6 . 2/11
Thank you so much this was amazing.
Anonymous chapter 6 . 1/22
Hi, so I know that you wrote this like 6 years ago... but I just needed to tell you how much I enjoyed this. I have literally never left a review but this story was so powerful that I had to let you know. I love your writing style, everything was so descriptive but it still flowed well, which is something that I struggle with a lot when I write. I really hope that you are still writing, And I also wanted to wish you the best of luck on your mental health journey. Even if things aren't better now, I know someday they will be. I'm not even sure if you still use this website... but yeah! Thank you for making me cry for like 45 minutes.
JimmyPenguin421 chapter 6 . 8/25/2019
I know this is a really old story, but if you're still on Fanfiction, I just want to say that my prayers are with you, and congratulations on stopping cutting!
As others have said, if you want someone to talk to, you can find me on Youtube as James Choo (Minecraft videos, mostly-my profile picure is currently the Millennium Falcon with rainbows. I say this because there are a lot of James Choos).
May the Force be with you.
Melwa Rat chapter 6 . 8/5/2019
Oh my god. This story described so much of what I have been through. I've been in Anakin, Padmè's and Ahsoka's shoes in this. With finding out that someone I love was self harming, worrying that getting them help would betray them, and going through it myself. This story beautifully painted the struggles I have been through in the past few years and I'm so happy you wrote it. I'm a little better now and I hope you are too. :)
Melwa Rat chapter 3 . 8/5/2019
This chapter was soooo good! I really relate to it and you described everything I've felt perfectly. I'm so extremely proud of you for staying clean five days. :)
Melwa Rat chapter 2 . 8/4/2019
This is so sad. I love your writing style so much and I wish I could write like u. :)
nerdgirl070709 chapter 1 . 6/3/2019
Sorry, I just noticed a small typo, when Anakin asks, “ Who let you in?” Obi-Wan responds with, “ You’re padawan.” It’s supposed to be “ your padawan.”

Other then that great chapter.
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